I have read your story and enjoyed it immensely, the only concern I have is: When will there be an update? There are easily hundreds of people who are looking forward to the continuation of this tale, and we all wonder at your absence. Hopefully this will pick you up and get you back to finishing this epic story.

All the best,
Mr. Anon

hey come on now, i know its hard to keep coming up with new ideas, but please at least post one more chapter! this story is really freaking amazing and just absolutely wonderful!! i've been folowing this story since 08-2004.

Are you continuing? I read the start of this 3 years ago on a friend's computer and it's been angging at me ever since. I looked it up yesterday and gah! It's fantastic. Do continue. Please :)

Okay, so I don't remeber if I've ever reviewed this and if I have then it has been much too long since I have. So in order to ease the guilt for not reviewing nearly as often as I should and the rabid anticipation I have for your next chapter; I am finally going to leave a review that is hopefully worthy of this AMAZING fic!

First your characters and how you develop them...well I would die for your talent. Link and Sheik in particular are wonderfully fleshed out. I won't lie, your fic occupies quite a bit of my attention (even when I'm supposed to be working on schoolwork ^-^;)

Second your descriptions for everything are some of the loveliest I've ever read on fanfiction. Sanctuary and Link's memories are my personal favorites.

Third the emotion...your ability to convey it just blows me away! Everything; fear, despair, hate, happiness, confusion. I feel them myself when I read your fic.

Last, your plot. It one of my three top favorite plots, in there with Rose Zemlya and Aubuyn. And I'll admit; I could positively strangle hug your Link, I love him THAT MUCH!! Anyways your fic is lovely and I can't wait for this next all important chapter! I await diligently.


Sincerely,

Blackfang13 (Lynx)

Hello! I am a long time reader of your story, who is ashamed to say that i have never previously reviewed. What i would have said the first time i read this, however, is exactly the same thing i would like to say about it now. It is intriguing and complex, with a wonderful writing style that just shines in the first person, and i have always been completely enthralled with this.
Furthermore, ever since i began reading on , my main interest has been the mystery of what happened to Link after majoras mask, so this story provided me with hours and hours of delving into my favorite interest of the Zelda world. IT is missing somethings, such as Navi, but it has also has a great deal many things which i hadnt been looking for in my search. This story has officially satisfied my love of that mystery, which so few stories go in to.
Overall, it has been beyond excellent, and i am happy to now officially join your impressively large fan base. Unfortunately, i expect i must wait a long time for another up-date, but that is alright. Take your time, i understand this next one is pivotal, so i wont press for it. Just know i am waiting anxiously and patiently, and will continue to do so for however long it takes. Keep em coming, and wonderful story!

where are you. ): this story is too amazing for you to not continue it.

Hello!

Would you believe this is the first non-anime/book fanfiction I've read? It's taken me like...four years to expand my horizons. Anyway...I thought you should know that you've set the bar high for my expectations of other fanfics.

This is an epic tale, and I'm quite enthralled by it. I've never played D2, but I loved the portrayals. I have always been a Zelda junkie, and am glad to see some depth given to the characters.

I love how you intertwine the different stories of Link and make them work for your story.

As for critiques...well you already mention the spell check thing like once a chapter, so I know you're aware of it. The only other thing I would say is that it seems as though you have no long-term plan of where to go with this...I mean, you set up a bunch of stuff that seems to slowly be coming to fruitition (i.e: Link becoming a demon), but it's kind of like...you're searching for a climax point. Maybe I'm wrong. I'm not trying to offend you or anything, I'm just stating what kind of vibe I'm getting from this.

Overall, I've really enjoyed reading this: kept me busy at work for the past...two weeks? (I can only read a little a day: time and such). Sheik and Link are both wonderfully portrayed, I'm always curious what's going to happen next. I'm particularly interested in the purpose of Shanis...I guess so far she's getting them through the Gerudo territory. And I wonder if we're ever going to see Link have closure with Malon the real or the hallucination/demon thing. But these are just thoughts through my head.

I notice you haven't updated since April...don't give up! You have a wonderful story here, and many are enjoying it. Inspiration is difficult sometimes, but if you can find a way to pull through and keep going, it will be worth it.

Cheers!
~Kae

Awesome story. I think this is one of my favorite stories. Keep up the good work. I am not going to read the next chapter until it's finished. Highly looking forward to the rest of this story: including act 2 & 3. Link falls in love with Quitise, however her name is spelled, at least that's my vote. With the rate this story is going (One chapter a month, average) This could take awhile. Maybe in a couple years I'll get an account and become a beta-reader (or more correctly editor). I will be keeping tabs on this story, though I might review inconsistently. Life happens, I don't check on stories constantly and I might review every couple chapters 'cause I didn't read them till the one I reviewed was posted. Again, keep up the good work.

Regards,
The Annoying One

You know, I honestly thought that i was never going to be able to read the next chapter. It's been so long since I've seen you write something on this...

Anyways, I can't think of anything that really stood out to me, other than the occational missed " " things.

So... Update soon, m'kay?

ah!! You're back! Welcome back!

even if i noticed some typos, but good chapter nonetheless!

Huzzah, You're still alive. I was very pleased I checked today, the snippets provided an interesting window into the the expected future. On another note I'm really impressed you stuck with this story this long in fact I'm so impressed I'll give you one free internet.*hands H7 a coupon for 1 internet* enjoy;)

... You own a Wii. You own Brawl. You lucky bastard, I demand you share.

Well, it's a short snippet. But you're alive! Perhaps it's the euphoria of seeing something again - although I wish it was a little more substantial - that made me overlook any large typographical errors. Really, I generally assume you have the control enough that any spelling mistake made is small and unnoticeable, and if it doesn't detract from the reading, I really don't care.

I'm supposing that's supposed to be Dark Link with his deep and nasty voice? Eh, it'll be interesting to see how things pan out. One thing I love about your stories is how you put attention to detail, but not so much that it slows the pace down to a yawn-worthy crawl. You can develop characters (although I guess most of us would love to see more character development on the horizon) subtly that it doesn't blatantly tell us what you want them to become, and with a thoroughness that allows us to imagine your character even outside the story.

Yes, keep on going doing what you've been doing the past... 5 years. Except I would like a faster return rate, although Heavens knows that I should work a little quicker too as well.

It's a race!
Cheers,
Lim, Wen Xuan

yay! an update! i started reading this fic forever ago and i've been hooked on it since, and i always get so giddy when i see that you updated! keep up the awesome work!

Please don't have died or anything. If you haven't please give some news.

hope you update soon.