Wow.

I love your descriptions, your imagery, your characterizations. It's all amazing. It seems like every word in this fic almost...it's planned out, carefully, but still natural--everything works so well.

How you wrote Lorelai and Rory's relationship...

Wow. Lorelai's struggle to be who she wanted to be, Rory's journey toward being who she wants to be. And just...

You have the talent that makes several only-prose chapters exciting and interesting, and (as much as I like doing that, lol), I at least find that really hard to do.

The dialogue is...so Gilmore. Mia leaving, Lorelai's life, Rory's, the house...

Heh.

It's so creative and just incredible writing. I'm sorry it took me this long to review--it deserves one for every chapter...that'll happen eventually. *nods* With it will come actual quotes in the reviews. ;-)

And the italics describing what happened, the flashbacks...so great.

Wonderful job. =D

AW...PLEASE START UPDATING AGAIN... I LOVE THIS STORY

your writing is so amazing and beautiful and poetic

wow...i have no idea were you're going with this but i really like it... great metaphor at the end

You've done an excellent job once again. Your stories are great works of fanfiction, and I look forward to your next update.

YAY!! MORE!!
I'm so happy your not dead!
*huwgs*
~Toki-chan

And the award for biggest procrastinator goes to… Me! The girl who should be finishing her school work but instead is reviewing you. (Something I should have done a while ago, by the way.) I loved this chapter. I really, really did. Lorelai’s getting a house! (“I’ll miss the questions about people living in my tool shed, though.” Hee! You can have a lot of fun with those kinds of questions. “That’s where we keep the guests that ask too many questions.” ;) Heh.) And Mia’s leaving! I love Mia, but ah, so is life. And so is the history of the show so… Anyways, poor Lorelai is losing a great friend but gaining a wonderful opportunity: She’s running the inn now! And Michel! Sookie! Heh, I was all happy when she met the two of them. By the way, the italics after meeting each of them was an excellent idea. You write too well. That’s it.

“The beginning of twilight had begun to paint the area surrounding the inn. The few lights that had been left on inside the shed glowed peacefully against the backdrop of subtle oranges and purples. A lone goose honked in the backdrop, echoing across the property.”

*sigh* I love your descriptions. And the last scene of this chapter was wonderful. They’re going to have a house! And your last few lines, the difference between a house and home… awe, that was so sweet. I loved it. I can’t wait for more.

... and my heart is with this story.

Cheers for Lorelai, Rory, and the author *cough*who rocks*cough*

The meeting of Lorelai and Sookie was beautiful and just so much more natural because Mia did the introductions. I really love that woman.

But, I did find one error. In the paragraph describing Lorelai and Sookie's relationship (in italics), you called Sookie "Lorelai."

Otherwise, I look forward to this story being continued.

Once again, great job. Can't wait til the next part! ;vD

Wow. That was amazing. Your writing flows very fluidly (is that even a word? I hope so), and it's just a pleasure to read it. You have Lorelai characterized perfectly. My favorite scene would have to be the flashback of Lorelai taking Rory to kindergarten. So bittersweet. You have an amzing amount of talent, and I'm so glad to have read this.

Thanks for the wonderful review of Whispered Existence, it really helped to cheer me up on a not so great day.
-Joan

I hate people who make rash decisions about people based on their age. Poor Lorelai. She did not deserve that type of treatment at all.

Wow, you really whizzed through the years, didn't you there? But the places you chose to put your empathases really won me over. Not that I didn't already think this was a wonderful story. But you know what my favorite part was? The part that said "To be continued..."

God, this is beautiful.
I love the title - very insightful. I find Lorelai one of the most fascinating characters to explore because she has so many layers. And you do it brilliantly. I can feel both her vulnerability and strength.
How do you do that with words? Make them work for you that way? It's amazing. Really.
This is completely original, moving, and I'm never going to be able to find the right words to express the way it makes me feel, so I'll just wait for more, eager to learn about the rest of her life through your incredible writing.

Oh my god I have tears in my eyes! That chapter was so sweet! This story is really good and you write this story so well. Please update soon. I can't wait to find out what happens.

i still love it! you really are such a good writer!! ah! i just can't wait for more

Oh wow...this story is great! Well, more than that actually, but my mind is going blank (I just woke up. So sue me. ;vD). It's just...wow! 'Kiss till the world made sense (or something like that)'--you don't get a line like that everyday. You are very talented, and I hope you grace us with another chapter soon!

Yep, I just said 'grace.' This story is good!