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Reviews For: Tanjoobi Omedetoo, KasumiChan

mercedes
2005-01-08
ch 1, anon.
abuseI love this story!! Please update soon!!
Venus Of Love
2003-09-12
ch 1,
abuseThis was one of the best written DOA fic in this category! I loved this so much; it was just so bitter sweet!

VOL-chan
Kain of the Uruha clan
2003-08-27
ch 1,
abuseHello there!
Finally managed to leave a reviev! Kyahaha & Gyahaha! Kheh... wonder how can I put my thoughts in words... well... one, two, three...
This is the best (and only, but nevermind) FanFic I ever read! I told you, it is very hard for a story (and not only)to put any emotions in me... I love this story! I dont remember when was the last time I was so excited! Really! I mean... um... I laught at the '30 yen' part, and felt sad-like thing in my hart at most of the time ^_^. The night I read this I was smileing to almost everyone (hope you know what i meen). Besides, I finally know how a 'date' look like! Kyah!
uh.. uhh.. have to calm a little... but really I could hardly hide my excitment... thanks for that... this feeling of 'beeing-close-to-crying'... i really liked it... thanks for these experiance...
And after all... Its emotions, that bring a sence to our lives!
thans again
and sorry for such a short rev... Told Im not good at those kind of things
Kyris
2003-06-27
ch 1,
abuseThank you so much for this fic! It's such a pleasure to come across a piece that effortlessly conveys the emotion, tension and atmosphere as yours does. Your characters were throughly believeable. I also couldn't help but feel sorry for Kasumi and Ryu. *sniffles*
Nemu
2003-06-14
ch 1,
abuseArigatou, oniisan.

Why? Because I learned from this and I keep learning from you every day about writing the Shinobi in character. Something I have yet to perfect, but you are so close to doing it. Everything was so much in character in this story, and the feeling that comes from it all almost moved me to tears. I'm not one to cry over a story, though ;)

I like the little thing with the "Haiku"... it's really nice and poetic. I wish I could come up with these things.

Overall, the story is nice and not too long so you can just keep reading until you're done - which a reader would want to when reading this. It's really something that sticks you to the screen for a while and has you thinking about it later.

Again, arigatou, oniisan, for teaching me more and more with this story.
And for praising that patience that I do not possess, but seem to have shown after all. ^_^

(You're making me write literature-ish in a REVIEW, niisan. Stop being so damn genius :p)

Ja! *snuggle*

Mari-chan
TigerEyes2
2003-06-09
ch 1,
abuse... thank you *so* much Niisan, I dont really have many words to say to express what I think of this other than its wonderfull. As with everything you write it is done beautifully.I would point out all teh parts I loved but that would just practically be rewriting the whole thing over in this box ...

I know you spent so much time on it. I thank you from the bottom of my heart. This will be the first actual story I have added to my favorites list normally I just add the authors and DO NOT think I missed that little statement about unlike some people who dont post all the time on the RP ...(*sticks out toungue*)

I loved this..once again thank you I will *always* cherish it.

~Imotochan~
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