Good one wild one! I find myself longing for a sequel of sorts. But I know making it a two shot would kinda ruin it. But some recesses of my mind still wander off to fantasize about what might happen after those two months, nineteen days and four hours. Perhaps after reminiscing about the incident Cho would find herself willing to re ignite that one nights' spark...

Perhaps she'd wait until it was late in the afternoon and go seek Hermione and alude to that book... hint that they should go study in Hermione's room and then... ;) lol I'm usually not like this but I really liked your story! It's so... unusual. I mean I'm going through the list of the M rated Cho/Hermione stories and so far I've not seen anything like this. It's so... poetic?... I dunno, it just seems more intellectual. And I think you paid heaps of attention when you wrote it... perhaps reading then re reading it etc.

Anyway this little window is starting to stuff up so I'll stop yapping now...

I really like your story. I think it's great. PUBLISH IT!jks, at least do me the honour of a continuation? or something. Or even just another Cho?Hermione story. I seem to be entranced by the pairing since recently (in other words this afternoon :)

Have a nice day :)

That's a shocker! Whoa! Good story...

Lovely. Truly lovely. A few typographical errors, but nothing that diminished the effect. Very coherent in a twisted way. I love it. Keep up the amazing work.
~Darcy

((And it's a fantastic one-shot, PLEASE don't do more))

Great work, but what happened afterwards? this is very interesting and I hope you'll continue with a sequel!

That's gorgeous!

Short, sweet, and to the point. Perfect!

'What wonderous things you find while bored out of your skull.' is my first and last reaction to this.

I this was good, there was one part i didn't quite get but otherwise it's great.

damn
now that is some quality angst
great fic

First reaction: HOLY CRAP!
Second reaction: ...Abuh?
Third reaction: Oh, they're good.

And I've stayed in the third reaction since then. That was just...Wow. I mean..wow. I can't think coherently, let alone type. I'm going to leave you with this sentiment:

Wow.

Rachel

liked it, it was powerful and emotional u should write more. i think u should

I have nothing to say because words cant discribe how I feel about this. amazingly talanted writting, and it evokes powerful emotions even though it is so short. I dont think you should continue because it makes an excelent one shot, but you should deffinately continue writting.

Wow... I Hate you so much! I was jerking off while reading this.. u got my ** everywhere!

wow. what a powerfull and emotional short story. i luved it!

aw

I love this. It's so simple, yet the point is crystal clear. You told a great story so quickly.