That almost made me cry! I love your writing style. ^_^

I do not understand that quote at all. Always I think people are brave for killing Tsu and Soka...cause I just don't wnat to think of it at the mo but I'll read. Did not take long before I realised Soka was dead and Tsu was 'trying' to cope and failing. Angsty depression that really cuts into you this one is. How did they get separated and why does he think its his fault...or is that just self-loathing for him still being alive when Hisoka told him to live on for him in Kyoto?
Narration is compelling and divine in every sense. I loved it but did not like the fact that the particulars of the event were not covered in any great detail! Oh peoples interactions and those italics were heart-breaking, every single one but in particular that last one where he's obviously gone into denial...its so sad I wanna cry (pout)

//Tsuzuki is having a rough couple of weeks.//

Looking back, that summary, along with the final line, just kills me completely. Poor Tsuzuki, he's always suffering. Surprisingly to my friends who are into YnM, he's not my fave because I believe in "Past is Gone (stop hitting yourself)" and most of his pain is self-inflicted. I love his interaction with Hisoka though, who brings him out, so this really hurt and in this I do feel for him.

*whimpers* I love you.

*can't find anything else to say* T__T *rereads story*

OW. Painful and so, so good. And if that wasn't enough, the ending...jesus. Perfect.

Oh my god.

The ending. Oh, the ending.

That's not just empty, that's *sick*.

Pure genius. Oh ... nice. Just so subtle and dark and terrible. That's good. really nice.

Wow.

the depression really sticks to me... you have the power of words.. this is such a wonderful piece.. hope you're doing fine ^^

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*gapes*

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*makes small, unidentifiable sound in back of throat*

you are so awful. T_T

after I read this...I'm just like O_O
now I feel numb all over.

anyways, top-notch depressingness. I love it.

I adore the way this is written, half detatched-Tsuzuki-narrating and half rambling-Tsuzuki-talking-to-himself, with all the short clipped sentences all over the place, like he's saying those things fast so he won't have to think about them.

The entire ending startled/scared me a little, but then I reread it and went, "oh". Mou, Tsuzuki, he knows what he should be doing but he just can't. The last section gives me a weird feeling, like he's forsaking something important (I'm so melodramatic ^^;;). It's so sad, though, knowing that everything just stopped like that for Tsuzuki and won't start up again.

Anyway, this was very well-written. Apology for all the ramblings (again). I always end up giving long reviews...

whoa! another great piece! it was worth the wait! write more! =)

crimson rulz! =)

Nice story :) I really liked it, angsty and sort of dark, but had some trouble getting adjusted to your writting at the begining. Anyway, kudos!

...Oh gods. I think I'm going to cry. And that is a *rare* thing indeed- I DO NOT CRY!

...I'm crying.

That was so...beautiful. In a sad, angsty way. It was extremely well-written- the interjections were masterful.

Curse you for making me cry!

*goes off to sob in her corner*

**Wolf**

'Lovely' isn't exactly the right word to use here, is it? It was maddeningly depressing, the sort that leaves a cloud of heavy air hanging around you after reading it. But I loved it. The sense of melancholy and robotic helplessness you managed to capture in Tsuzuki's flashback (I'm assuming that's what they were), the details, ironies... wonderfully captivating.

Am writing a review because this is the first time a story has genuinely brought tears to my eyes. Wonderfully crafted, subtle enough to slip past all defenses and pull the reader in, and horribly, heartrendingly perfect. Thank You.