i know it is unlikly but please finish.

noo! POr Alanna!!
stupid jon, i hope she gets betta soon!
and YAYS for george! love him, and raoul!!

I like your story. Please update as soon as you can.

This is very good. Quite original, and i like how you use Myles in the story--no one ever seems to notice him! Are you finished writing this, or would you consider continuing?

Gr! Why did you stop writing this story!??!?!?!?!! It is awesome! I uber-super-mega

Hi good story r u planning to update it really wanna know how itturns out :)

Really good please update soon. I noticed u started this in 03 I hope u continue good work

I love it! Are you going to keep writing? A little more description would be good. Maybe what Alanna, George, Jon, Eleni, and Myles are thinking?

Love the story update! I want to know how the boys react to Alanna's secert

this is still really good! please, you must continue! Please??^^

this is really good still!^^

this is very sad, but very good as well.

good story so far!

THe plot thickens...
Oops sorry, that probably was your line.
Anyways, keep on writing, and I hope you update soon!

This is very good, except for a few minor mistakes that the spell check wouldn't have picked up, like of into or and now comma. Apart from that, great story! I like it!