 Sora Takenouchi Ishida 2009-12-18 . chapter 11This fic is absolutely fantastic! I hope, if it's not over, that you consider finishing it.
I feel really bad for Bulma. Goku/Chi-Chi are adorable on it! I love them so much. |
 Son Vegetto Briefs 2009-12-04 . chapter 18I loved this! i hoped you didn`t forget about it.
10/10 |
 Madin312 2009-09-20 . chapter 18 Boo hoo... I'm crying! It's a good one! |
 Madin312 2009-09-20 . chapter 15 The story makes me cry.. Good job!! |
 Chichiforever 2009-02-05 . chapter 25this was a fantastic story! wow great job amazing |
 ccjj 2008-09-17 . chapter 17 wish those guys got a better death than that. |
 noname00 2008-03-07 . chapter 25 i can't believe i actually finished this in two days^^
your fic was just great and i can't believe i never reviewed this fic seeing that i reviewed the sequel some 4 yrs ago but the thing is i saw my name in your author note and you told me to keep on reading but i never saw my review, though i really didn't look for it and i forgot that my name was once noname with not 0's attached but enough of that im off to the sequel and if i try i might be able to finish that today or maybe sunday^^ |
 chocolatefudgecake 2008-01-12 . chapter 1I am so blind! I am so frustrated I didn't see your story sooner, because it is so good! Darn me. :P Hehehe. But all the same, I am still thankful I saw your story because it's interesting, lively and full of ChiChi/Goku and the whole love war is so cool!
You must've been really inspired to this, because the plot is fantastic! I'm a real ChiChi and ChiChi/Goku fan and I am pleased to read this awesome creation of yours. More power to you, and I may submit more reviews in the other chapters. :D
Hehehehe.
You're a fantastic writer.
P.S. Goodluck with the Bulma or Bulma/Vegeta fans. :D |
 Darkangel000 2007-08-13 . chapter 25Great story. Love the whole Chichi/Goku/Vegeta thing, and vegeta's 'crush', great plot! I look forward to reading the sequel and your other stories! keep up the great work.
Cheers! =D |
 Yui-tan 2006-06-29 . chapter 19I love how you protrayed Chi-Chi in this story so far, most people don't see that her yelling is really her saying that she cares. Just like when a mother fusses over you. She tells Gohan not to fight/ study a lot because she wants him to have a future with a steady income and not be hurt. Goku and Chi-Chi are caring people but lets face it, they aren't as rich as Bulma. They're probably always trying to make ends meat. Chi-Chi doesn't want her son to be like that and Gohan will be gratful for that in the long run. I also think that Chi-Chi and Goku have one of the best relanships in the Dragonball world. They helped change each other. Think about it, if Goku hadn't married Chi-Chi he would still be fighting for the trill of it and not to protect others also he became more responsible as a husband/father/friend/savior. Chi-Chi changed a lot too when Goku died. She bacame more lienant but still responsible. She relised that she can't protect her children forever and that they weren't babies anymore. All in all I love Chi-Chi and I enjoy how you protrayed her in this fic. Keep up the good work!
P.S. DEATH TO BULMA! BWAHAHAHHAHAHAH! |
 oloeopia 2006-05-01 . chapter 2 i always wondered what would happened if they had stayed fused..
good job! |
 Lady Thundera 2006-04-10 . chapter 25 You sound like a hard core Bulma fan. You really shouldn't be reading this story. You were warned and frankly, I have little patience for Bulma fans who read this story, have a good idea it won't be good for Bulma and yet complain. I pointed out Bulma faults and believe me she had plenty. She's not one of the best main characters to me. That's my opinion and I'm entitled to it. It's my story and I can write it however I want! The problem with many Bulma fans you tend to ignore a lot of her bad faults. You read stories that's pro-Bulma (most of whom don't point out her faults) and love it even it bashes ChiChi which most of the Bulma fans do but when ChiChi finally gets a fair shake and Bulma doesn't look good, you get upset. Sure, I might have exaggerated on Bulma on some points but many Bulma fans/writers write ChiChi in a false light and their exaggerations go far and beyond.
ChiChi in the anime is greatly different in the manga. She may have lost her temper but the anime exaggerated. It's meant as a joke but it got lost in translation overseas. ChiChi's rarely shown in the manga anyway so the anime writers had little to go on in developing her character. There's nothing wrong with ChiChi. She can be attractive to a character like Vegeta. I made examples for it in my story. Open your mind to the story.
This story was written three years ago and when I wrote it, it wasn't that long after the fusion between Goku and Vegeta. If you think the story has been done to death, why are you reading it? I like to point out that though the storyline has been done to death, my story was originality over a used storyline.
So Vegeta have a stronger opinion but Goku hasn't been home in seven years. You don't think he may have a stronger and fight harder in the fusion to finally be home with his wife and sons, one he never met? In my story, Vegeta has feelings for ChiChi. You don't think that a part of him may want to be with her? With this story you have to open your mind and let go of your own inhibitions. If you read the story unbiased and see the reviews you would find answers to your questions. This matter has been dealt with three years ago and I consider the topic dead. I will not go back and explain myself over and over again.
I try to be fair in my opinions and use examples from the manga and anime to explain my point. I think the story's pretty good and I'm very critical of my stories and frankly over 800 reviewers cannot be wrong. |
 J.W. Appel 2006-04-09 . chapter 1 This is just {ugh} I don't know what to say. It's both fantastic and horrible at the same time. First off, the ole "Vegito stays fused" Storyline has been done to death several times
here's a list of titles:
1. This story right here.
2. "Taking a Bite of My Apple"
3. "Return of the Saiyans"
4. "Son of Vegito"
5. "DBZ: Altiverse"
6. "DBZ: Alternate Buu Saga"
7. And one with a title I can't remember but was pretty close to this one.
And another thing: WHY THE HECK DID YOU MAKE BULMA THE "BAD GUY"!? I LOVR BULMA! SHE'S ONE OF THE BEST MAIN CHARACTERS! ALL SHE WANTS IS HER HUSBAND BACK FOR HEAVEN'S SAKE, WHY IS EVERYONE SO AGAINST THAT?! IF SHE'S WILLING TO DO WHATEVER IT TAKES TO GET A LOVED ON BACK THEN I SAY WE SHOULD ALL BE LIKE THAT!
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Sorry, lost my temper for a minute there. Look, I'm not bashin' your story I think it's good but... you know it's just my opinion and no hard feelings right? But I have one more point to make: Vegeta has more control over Vegito than Goku {you can tell right away} therefore his feelings for Bulma would be millons of times stronger than any he'd have for {ugh!} Chi-chi {if any.} That's all I'm saying.
Thanks for listening. Bye. |
 Essence-chan 2005-10-03 . chapter 1i love this story keep updating |
 . 2005-08-23 . chapter 25 Your story was awesome... Looking forward to reading sequel :) |