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Gijinka Renamon
2004-04-16 . chapter 2
Not bad, not bad at all. Me likey.
alocin
2003-08-02 . chapter 2
Cool idea for how Smith worked out he could clone himself! He's so cool, as is this fic!
Midnight5
2003-07-05 . chapter 2
Are we by any chance going to see more chapters? *hint hint*

I truly find this fic to be very interesting and insightful. Please keep it up!

~Midnight
LadyKayoss
2003-07-05 . chapter 2
Argh, I wanted to review this days ago, but my computer wouldn't load the bottom portion... Anyway, this is excellent! And I like your explanation for Smith's continued existence and his new ability; I hope the real explanation, if it happens, isn't vastly different. Good job! You actually made me feel sorry for Agent Brown.
Kay
2003-06-25 . chapter 1
I love this story ! It roxs ! Please continue writing.
Kay
2003-06-25 . chapter 1
I love this story ! It roxs ! Please continue writing.
Cmdr. Gabe E
2003-06-23 . chapter 2
to quote smith, "REMARKABLE"! I LOVE THIS! it was very interesting seeing smith going against brown, and how brown treated him now that he's an anomaly. i really love your detailed style of writing! i actually pictured the chase between jones and brown while i was reading that scene ^_^! very well done! i can't wait until jones encounters smith ;)! you really have to write that piece! i wonder if smith's encounter with jones will be different from brown's ;)!
Chibi Hime
2003-06-23 . chapter 1
Wonderful Smith angst! keep up the good work. This is very well written, especially relating to Smith's inner thoughts and feelings! Great work!
unwinding fantasy
2003-06-21 . chapter 2
In a word... perfect. ^__^
SmithLurve4eva
2003-06-21 . chapter 2
Dude! *hungrily grabs cookie*

That was an amazingly well written look at everyone favourite homicidal maniac ^_^ Don't you just want to hug him and say, "Yes! You you you!"
0100110011
2003-06-21 . chapter 2
Nice...
This is great stuff. I love it. Amazing really.
JoMatrixL0
2003-06-21 . chapter 2
Wow. This fic is simply excellent ^_^
It shows the internal struggle of Smith extreamly well, going from logical agent to psychotic anomaly.
BTW, I believe there's 6 months between The Matrix and The Matrix: Reloaded, to answer your question.
LadyKayoss
2003-06-18 . chapter 1
Argh! You did it again, Phi... You came along and wrote another cool fic using one of my favorite characters. You did an excellent job humanizing... no, that doesn't apply to an Agent... uh, fleshing out... shoot, still not right... You did a really good job with Smith. Yeah, there we go. Great story!
Kayt
2003-06-16 . chapter 1
This is ridculously pretty. I like your vision of semi-suicidal Smith, not to mention your turn of phrase. I look forward to more!
Cmdr. Gabe E
2003-06-15 . chapter 1
wow, ntrophi :)...a very well written smith piece :)...i love smith, and i love how you portrayed him ^_^ - very in-character and so full of essence as to who he was (in matrix1). while reading this, it's as if it was smith who was talking - i could really feel his hatred towards anderson, and his doubt towards the system that used to control him. you were able to portray what smith really felt when he was deleted...and why he has come back. i guess we'll never really know what happened to smith in between m1 and reloaded, but fanfics like this can at least give us clues ^_^!
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