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Reviews for: Watermelon Girl
TharzZzDunN
2005-09-23 . chapter 1
It was still a nice oblique angle to tie the series into each other. Good story.
Launigsiae
2004-04-11 . chapter 1
Nice
dan-chan
2003-07-06 . chapter 1
now thats creepy... continue and youll be given a cookie n.n
Koroc
2003-06-30 . chapter 1
Heh... I liked this story. I'm curious about something, though...

About the introduction:

In his matching trunks, Kunou walked over slowly. "We've been stuck on this island so many years...we're lovebirds in paradise, right?" He put an arm over Ranma's shoulder as they admired their four children.

"I'm so blissful," she said...

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Is the reference intentional, or am I only assuming there was an allusion?
elisteran
2003-06-17 . chapter 1
Funny.

I did thought the summary was a bit misleading, though; it made it sound very much more AUish than this ended up being (like Ranma's #1 ambition was to have kids by Kuno, and now Kuno had to live up to it). The formatting was a bit distracting (too much whitespace), and I noticed a few spelling errors (e.g., 'Nobel Lord'). The story's direction felt a bit wavering, as it tried to blend Ranma's psychological introspection with a wacky storyline.

All in all, this was a worthy story, but it felt a little below some of Ron Dow75's other stories.
Poly
2003-06-15 . chapter 1
I love it.
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