|Reviews for Unseen Love|
| xFlipJamsx 12/24/10 . chapter 4
please continue the story. i really want to know what happens.
| morbidenigma 8/1/05 . chapter 1
Hey just to let you know your story hold quite a few spelling mistakes. But I love it and I'm certantly going to keep reading. Keep up the fantastic work :)
| Lillian Rose 7/20/04 . chapter 4
Hey that was awsome! i loved it! please write more soon.
| ccfleursdelys 1/13/04 . chapter 4
oh too sweet you're really a great autor i like yours storys his love for her it's so cute they are too cute
please update soon can't wait
| Crystal 10/26/03 . chapter 4
This is one of the best fics I have read so far and that's saying something. Can't wait for the next part. Crystal
| snow queen 7/5/03 . chapter 4
you must update my lively hood depends on what is going to happen next.
| Sorceress Fujin 6/20/03 . chapter 4
| lemon lover 6/20/03 . chapter 3
please write ALOT more lemon with ALOT of details and please write some ass-kicking with vegeta and yamcha. when you write the lemon part, try to make it at least a whole chapter ok
| draegon-fire 6/19/03 . chapter 3
You're right when you said this would be different than other "3 year" fics. Vegeta is uber sweet, and I think it's really cool! I always thought Yamcha was a jerk, and you're writing that so well.
| love-sora 6/16/03 . chapter 3
I really like this story. Its really cool. Please go on.
Count this as 3 reviews because two of my friends read it and are to lazy to write a review.
| jossy 6/16/03 . chapter 2
i think its a good fic only that there was some mispelling but thats ok no one is gtg and good luck on the rest
| PunkVegetaInu-YashaLuver 6/15/03 . chapter 2
Well I am back, having just finished reading chappie 2, and once again, very nicely written! The only thing that bugged me in this one was all the grammatical errors! You did some where/were/we're usage wrong, as well as some spelling...actually...lots of spelling. You should definitely proofread before posting! _
Nonetheless, you're an excellent writer and I can't wait for your next post! Great story and update soon!
| PunkVegetaInu-YashaLuver 6/15/03 . chapter 1
HOWDY! I just read the first chapter of your new story, and it was really well written! I'm relieved that you didn't use all of the awful cliches that you so so commonly nowdays in B/V stories, such as the ever frequent calling Bulma "woman" by Vegeta, or the aggressive, rude, evil-and-yet-I-love-you Vegeta.
Anyways, enough of my ramblings! I'm off to read chappie 2, keep em coming coz this one rocked!
| Funny Purpule American Fr 6/14/03 . chapter 2
Hey, great story so far, though it would help if it was edited a little more.
It get's bugging after a while that you spell a word wrong over and over again.
But hey, look who is talking, me who is a C in grammar!'