please continue the story. i really want to know what happens.

Hey just to let you know your story hold quite a few spelling mistakes. But I love it and I'm certantly going to keep reading. Keep up the fantastic work :)

Hey that was awsome! i loved it! please write more soon.

Love,

Lillian Rose

oh too sweet you're really a great autor i like yours storys his love for her it's so cute they are too cute
please update soon can't wait
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This is one of the best fics I have read so far and that's saying something. Can't wait for the next part. Crystal

you must update my lively hood depends on what is going to happen next.

MORE!

please write ALOT more lemon with ALOT of details and please write some ass-kicking with vegeta and yamcha. when you write the lemon part, try to make it at least a whole chapter ok

You're right when you said this would be different than other "3 year" fics. Vegeta is uber sweet, and I think it's really cool! I always thought Yamcha was a jerk, and you're writing that so well.

I really like this story. Its really cool. Please go on.

Count this as 3 reviews because two of my friends read it and are to lazy to write a review.

Bye

i think its a good fic only that there was some mispelling but thats ok no one is gtg and good luck on the rest

Well I am back, having just finished reading chappie 2, and once again, very nicely written! The only thing that bugged me in this one was all the grammatical errors! You did some where/were/we're usage wrong, as well as some spelling...actually...lots of spelling. You should definitely proofread before posting! _

Nonetheless, you're an excellent writer and I can't wait for your next post! Great story and update soon!

Peace,

*Punkky*

HOWDY! I just read the first chapter of your new story, and it was really well written! I'm relieved that you didn't use all of the awful cliches that you so so commonly nowdays in B/V stories, such as the ever frequent calling Bulma "woman" by Vegeta, or the aggressive, rude, evil-and-yet-I-love-you Vegeta.

Anyways, enough of my ramblings! I'm off to read chappie 2, keep em coming coz this one rocked!

Peace,

*Punkky*

Hey, great story so far, though it would help if it was edited a little more.

It get's bugging after a while that you spell a word wrong over and over again.

But hey, look who is talking, me who is a C in grammar!'