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porsha mcneil
2006-08-23 . chapter 9
this story was good.
i love inuyasha hes so darn cute
that's stupid considering he's a cartoon... but its true
anyway great story signed porsha chan
kingdomhearts soar
2005-09-04 . chapter 9
Aw that was so sweet ^_^
Ellie
2005-04-07 . chapter 9
Lovely story! I've read fics which have Rin meeting up with Inuyasha and company, but this is the most realistically I think it's ever been handled... The part where Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru are at a stand-off has some particularly cool tension. I really like the way you show Rin's torn loyalty, too.
Ellie
2005-04-06 . chapter 1
Ohohoho!! XD
Varethane
2005-03-31 . chapter 3
Ohh, no... she insulted the haori he got from his mother... ;_; Poor Inuyasha.

Nehoo, this is quite funny ^_^ Lovely story. (Random bit of... err... randomness: Adult Swim called Inuyasha's ears cat ears in one of their early commercials. I bet that confused a LOT of people...)

Taa! ^_^
superberri4
2004-08-12 . chapter 9
Hehe! That was funny! And a nice ending too. :D
HeartAke
2004-06-24 . chapter 9
Just outright sensational - I gotta give you credit for that. I'm so glad that when I found this story it was already complete; there is nothing that I hate more than getting stopped in my tracks, especially when a story explores the human (youkai) element so very well. You seemed to have shown to me a level of emotional insight that I could not even begin to have comprehended before this story. It is a great piece of character, and by simply reading it I now believe that I understand that all too elusive individual Rin. Your damn good at what you do, the both of you.
PS Your habit of using double quotations to represent thoughts generally confused me more than anything else. Often times couldn't tell when they were thinking, and when they were talking. Also, there were frequent grammatical pit holes (those points where the flow of the story is interrupted by a sentence that isn't arranged properly and thus doesn't make sense. Those could probably be easily corrected by giving the story some time to sit before you give it a read through, that way you are more likely to read what is on the page, and not what is in you memory banks. And if you have never heard of the term grammatical pit hole, don't worry about it because it is a term that I made up myself :-)

Great story though. I liked it; and it was one of that special breed, that seems to give you a shiver up your spine with each and every poetic word.
Monika
2004-06-06 . chapter 9
:: wipes away a tear :: That was so kawaii! I was like, sitting on the edge of my seat, wondering what was gonna happen. You are a really established writer. I wish you luck on your other stories!
animegirl007
2004-05-05 . chapter 1
very interesting...
jarjayes
2004-04-30 . chapter 8
Hello! LOved this fic! It was SO sweet! CAn I add it to my site?
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RedHerring
2004-02-06 . chapter 9
*sniff* that was sweet and adorable. *wipes away a tear*
Magical Girl!
2004-01-28 . chapter 9
That was great! I loved it!! it was sweet and funni!! great job!
Angel Youkai
2003-10-25 . chapter 9
That was so adrable! it made me laugh, and that is an accomplishment. ^_^ i like ur other stories too
Luke the warrior
2003-10-10 . chapter 9
WOW!! THIZ ROCKS
kurohime
2003-09-15 . chapter 9
KAWAI!
that was so cute! i really loved it! when are you going to update your other fics? im reading inoku and expectations they are both really good.
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