It's really good so far! Very humorous also, which is another thing I LOVE about this story! Please, continue when you can!

Ja ne,

R_G

hej!!
Cool ficcie! Tis erg grappig maar ook lief!! ^^
Ga zo door met het goeie werk!
bye bye!

I like the plot of the story and how you change POV's for different chapters keep it up!

wow!
how long it took to you, but ah... finally is updated, please update t soon ok?
your good!
sayonara
matta ne

what else will vidy ask gohan, will he win the bet, what happends when vidy finds out that it was a bet, will gohan find out stuff about her, will she find out a lot about gohan, does she still know how to fight? ^_^ I've never seen the movie only commercials.

is this sort of a a/u?'cause it seems like hercole isn't 'world champ'considering that not many people like videl in YOUR story.and does videl still do martial arts?please have these questions answered in your next chapp 1

LIME'S A **!DOWN WITH THE **!AND HOW **' DARE THAT STUPID GOHAN BE RUDE TO MY VIDEL!??!

hi sweetie!
ow I love your new chapter!
ow give me more Gohan! Not enough Gohan!!
please hon' give me more...

~ love your own Dawny (Pia's little girl)

um this really is an awkward one but err yeah well...

^_^ LOVED IT!! keep it up!!

Update soon??

-HG

lol, this is pretty good. Your spelling isn't as good as some's, but other than that it's alright

^_^ will vidy become the prom queen, can she change, will gohan get to know the real her, does she know martial arts?

^_^ will vidy become the prom queen, can she change, will gohan get to know the real her, does she know martial arts?

ya need ta stop talkin like this. the way you write is hard to read write it more understandable. good plot but why does videl have to be a nerd.And gohan such a snooty and rude person.

if u want me to update on the goku/videl give me topic