I love the Will/Jack pairing though I have to admit they were a touch out-of-character and the history was confusing, but that is why they call it a fanFICTION, I suppose! I'd love to see you expand on this as the Will/Jack pairing is the absolute bestest! Hope to see more lovely stories from you soon. I like you set-up and POV changes. It flowed perfectly.

Um...It was confusing especially in the "attempted suicide part." Will and Jack were out of character- you could hgave used Jack's flamboyant...gayness as a bit of humor. Jack and Karen are the funniest part of the show! Also, the part about Will and Jack ending up in bed together was a little bit disturbing and I really doubt it would have happened that quickjly. They both would have needed time to think the wehole thing over- sort of a head rush for both I'd say. Um...It was okay though..I guess. Keep writing! Practice makes perfect!

Well, though I LOVE will/jack together - this is kinda out-of-character. But still, I am so happy you wrote a w/j fanfiction :) write more stories!

I love the Will/Jack pairing, but the way this story was written seemed too rushed and payed too little attention to detail. Will and Jack were completely out of character, although Grace was alright. It's such a shame that this is the only example of Will/Jack that I could find...

i really like the Jack/will pairing, and this is a great example! good job, and i hope you write another like this

it was short and very passionate.

I LOVE this story! Hope there'll be more. Do you know how hard it is to find any, especially good, Will/ Jack stories? Maybe I'm looking in the wrong places, but I'm pleased that I found at least one!

Loved it! Keep it up!

Loved it! it rocked!

that was really good. i love it. i always thought that jack and will belong together.

Cool! Are you gonna expand this? You could go major places with this!
What's Karen gonna think?
I can't wait to see if you improve this [not that itn isn't perfect already]
keep up the good work!

I love the story- it's really sweet and I wish it would happen in the show too! I think Will and Jack would be so cute together!

Nice

I really like this story. It's sweet, and I reall do think that a Will/Jack story line on the show would be possible, if not great. Will/Jack FOREVER!

Great story, and keep it up!

yay! there is such a shortage of good will and grace stories... but im happy to tell you yours is one of them! the only comment i have is that it would be better if you had stretched it out a bit... geven some description, flesh out the sensations, the feelinsg, etc etc... but yeah, good stuff! write more! write a karen/grace! :P ~ta
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