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| Shifter128 2005-02-12 ch 3, | abuseHmm so a Shape-Shifter eh.Hmm I'm obsessed with the shifties.Well Janella 'teleports', it seems alot like the dragons going 'between' in Anne McCaffrey's DragonRider books.Hehe thats just my 'pinion though.Great story so far I really like it. |
| Draco 2004-04-05 ch 1, anon. | abuseI noticed a lot of Mary Sue tendencies (Small, attractive, skinny, blah etc. remember that a good character should have at least one major flaw). I have seen WAY too many "cat people" and it's starting to (excuse the temporary ranting) annoy me. Not bad, though, i liked the way you introduced the characters. |
| C-Chan10 2003-09-26 ch 18, | abuseYaY! I like this story! And YEAH! HE IS SO FIT! Hehe, I stopped in the middle of London to gorm at him, lmao! Good story! |
| H.C.G 2003-09-07 ch 18, | abuseHey Janella It's Sam, your cousin. This story rocked, I'm just so speechless. Write a another, please. |
| dawn 2003-08-31 ch 18, anon. | abusenice story... please write more... it just had the feeling that there should be more about the developing romance between them and the readers would like to know about Janella's stepmoms i know i really would... i know u don't know me but please email me back if u have another story with Kurt and Janella in it... i would really enjoy reaqding it or them... ;-) Thanx Dawn |
| MetaChi 2003-08-29 ch 18, anon. | abuseYou must see it! 'Tis Awesome! ^__^ The END?! That was a short chappie! And how can it be the end? She never got revenge on Pietro! We need to work on that crazy fic! OOh, maybe we should wait 'till after you see Pirates! Heh heh heh. . . |
| Cor Strike 2003-08-28 ch 18, anon. | abuse*Is too lazy to sign in nowadays, since he doesn't review often* Oh, I really like this story! *Usually holds the reviews off until the end of the story/gets to the last chapter available* I hope you write a sequel! |
| MetaChi 2003-08-23 ch 17, anon. | abuseHehe. That was so sweet! I knew the other kids would walk in on 'em! Bet it only takes about ten minutes before everyone finds out. Sorry I didn't review! - been busy. I saw Pirates of the Caribbean twice this week!, and was checking out fanfics for it. And I was trying to find trailers to download for it too. Have you seen it yet? |
| MetaChi 2003-08-15 ch 15, anon. | abuseYou said 'phantom'!! Woo! *pause* Heh heh. . . This wasn't stupid! I liked it! 'Twas action-ish! Action is good. . . ^_^ Poor Kurt! Poor, poor him! Good thing those two have that blood bond thing goin'. . . I know why you picked Logan! He's COOL! Very cool. ^.^ This wasn't as sappy as the last chappie. And I like it too. ^^; 18 chapters? Wow. How about this blackout, huh? *rolls eyes* I wonder what really caused it? |
| Retneprac 2003-08-07 ch 12, anon. | abuseUm, if you already have 18 chapters written then why are there only 14 posted? I ask because I really like the story and I have finished reading what is posted. |
| Something Forgettable 2003-07-29 ch 14, | abuseYAY! |
| C-Chan10 2003-07-29 ch 14, | abuse2 ThingZ...No Wait...3 ThingZ 1.I Liked Jurassic Park 3 Too, An I Walked Past The Guy Who PlayZ Billy (Alessandro Nivola) In London, I Was All 0.0 2. I Read OTP And i thought it was boring ^_^ 3. I really like this story Lol |
| MetaChi 2003-07-28 ch 14, anon. | abuseo.O; The fifteenth?! That's. . . . that's. . . FOREVER! Nah, just kiddin'! Hope ya have fun! Woo, HP #5! *thinks* In that e-mail, you said someone died who had six stars in the name. . . Hey! I know who you meant now! *cries* I KNOW! It's awful! *grins* But maybe he didn't really die! *hopes beyond hope* I feel really, really bad for the people who chose him as their favorite character. . . Mine's Lupin. And Dumbledore, of course. ^__^ Yes. Yes you are. Except that has to change. I gotta add 'Angry Beavers/Rocko/Harry Potter' to it. LOL. Yeah, Batik staff! Almost like a Bo! Woo!! Hmm. . . What movie is Kurt gonna see? Well. . . Talk to ya later! |
| MetaChi 2003-07-22 ch 13, anon. | abuseHey, I been meaning to ask, who's Remy? (random thought that chose this moment to pop out. =^^=) You updated this chapter fast! AND you're already up to ch. 18?! Wow, you work on stories fast! So get working on Green People! ^_~ Whoa! Freaky nightmare! Dude, that's SCARY! No wonder she was so freaked out afterwards . . . I would be too. LOL! Now they're saying they like this story . . . Heh heh . . . What changed their minds from the last chapter? |
| MetaChi 2003-07-22 ch 12, anon. | abuseNO!! I'm reviewing! See? See? Don't die! You're my only TMNT/Zimmy/LotR/X-Men/Paranormal/dinosaur friend!! Hey, I've never read Dracula . . . I mean to someday, though. M . . . chocolate! Well . . . . anuther kewl chappie! 'Cept this one was kinda sappy. . . Not that there's anything wrong with that, of course!! ^_^ Hmph. Lucky you. I don't think any stores near my house sell/rent any Evolution DVDs . . . 'Course, I haven't looked, either . . . Hey! You uploaded another chapter! Well, I'm off to read it! |