I liked it. Very CUTE!

Aw, this is such a cute fic, and it almost brought me to tears...
Great fic! ^-^
keep writing

~Aqua~

aw yours is the only story that made me wanna cry...and i dont do tears and sadness and mushy stuff like that

that was a very sweet fanfic!

Very sweet. I like it.

LOL.. im liking it.. itz weird tho... i mea the plot is ok but the names have been changed which sort of makes it confusing... but ROCK ON!

Gah, Haru is so cute! You've written the first in-character "good" Haru I've read so far. XD

Aww how sweet ^_^, update soon

PLEASE UPDATE SOON! This is great!

Aww wow, i love this bit:
Tohru was like the sun, shedding bright light on everything, and Haru was like a flashlight. Sometimes on, sometimes dark, but when he turned his gaze on you, it was only on you.
That was really good!!

aw! Love it !!

Hi! It's been a loong time since you updated, I remember being interested the first time I read it. I 'm glad to see you're continuing it.

Haru is definitely sweet !! Great work !

I'm looking forward to more.

cute so far...poor mouse, even though i'm a big big fan of the cat (love hearts in eyes)...write more soon.

the story is pretty well written, just short.