*sniff*

OMG, you have to continue this immediately. poor Jesse! {Jesse}

more soon! :D

wow! that was an amazingly powerful piece! I was holding back tears the whole time and it wasn't just cause you killed off a character it was cause you made us feel every emotion as it happened. Great story like all of your stories

Oh wow really, really powerfull!

wow...i think i'm in shock...
this is absolutely beautifully written.
if all of your fics are like this...
well...needless to say... i have to go looking now...
thanks for an stunning piece!

Okay this is depressing once again. If I wasn't such a happy gal I would put a gun to my head and pull the fing trigger!

BUT > There is always a but ~~ you killed Adam who to me looks like he rapes children for kicks so for that... this story has much promise!

YEAH! Adam's dead my daughter can go play in the yard.

Okay I have issues... but I did come back to read and I likey!

ace :)

Oh sob...it's so sad. I could never identify with Jesse, but this makes me want to hug him in my arms and hold him forever. This is SO said. It's beautiful. Sniffle. What a lovely little vignette.

This good. Sad, but good.

OH MY GOD...you killed Adam... that was sso sad...*sniff...are you gonna continue?

whoow...
I have to take a deap breath, cause I have holding it during the story. This was one hell of a story!!

Thank you for updating so fast!
I hope for another chapter or a sequel, but this was so magnificant, this is really complete!

That was cool - very somber but it summed up everything Adam was supposed to represent both in fan fiction and on TV. John Shea would have played this script beautifully as would Forbes Marsh. Nicely done.

Brilliant as usual, AliasJane! I hope you'll go on into the past and show us some of the lead-up to this situation. But even if it's not this story, please write more soon -- I'm stuck at home for a week and I always look forward to reading your work! Give me some more excellence to while away the hours! --Susan

Wow, it did feel like something was missing from the first one. and i guess this was it.
I've always wondered how it would go for the rest of them, if something truly did ever happen to adam.

Good POV on Jesse's part. Glad you had him found and comforted by Shalimar and Emma. This was a good sequel to Adam's POV.

This was well written. Very poignant. I can see Adam giving his life for Jesse and Jesse trying to save them both regardless of the pain it causes him. He almost made it, didn't he? Well done.

So very sad! You do handle emotion well.

Not to be a pest, but I hope this doesn't mean you've given up on the other story.