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| mistylove 2000 2007-08-15 ch 1,  | abuseADVANCESHIPPING!? I HATE ADVANCESHIPPING.YOU ARE MAD .ASH & MISTY FOREVER |
| Kara Ay 2005-08-05 ch 1, | abuseQuestion:Where are you going to update your stories? Because there are some gold value stories that you left unchecked?Be a little merciful update your stories! Bye,smile all the time! |
| Artistshipper (Nani? what'... 2004-12-15 ch 1, anon. | abuseSecond the motion from AAML-FREAKAZOID |
| AAML FREAKAZOID 2004-12-10 ch 1, | abuseGeat Story! Just dont make ash fall in love with may or something...or you wont live to write another fic... |
| ??? 2003-11-06 ch 1, anon. | abuseI thought this was a Ash and May story. |
| Barbara LeMaster 2003-08-30 ch 1, anon. | abuseI have wondered what an Ash/Misty/May triangle would be like, and I think you've defined it well. I wonder if May's attraction to Ash is more like having a crush on one's teacher, and how Misty will react to this. It might be ** May to realize that Ash is genuinely attracted to Misty. BTW, where is Brock? Poor guy. Imagine him reacting to seeing two girls fight over Ash! This was a great opening chapter, with the characters all well-defined, and I'm looking forward to reading more. This is officially the longest review I've ever given anyone. ^^;; |
| SonicFrank 2003-07-11 ch 1, | abuseThis fic was awesome! Honest to true, you're a GREAT writer, and I love your style! Though I have a completely different one, I think yours is simply unique! Good luck, and don't keep me waiting TOO long, okay? ^__^ SonicFrank: Long live the Blue Hedgehog |
| Dragoness 2003-07-10 ch 1, | abuseEEps I'm late on reading this. I went out on a non-ficcy mood for a while otherwise I definitely woulda looked at this *^.^*; This is cute, they seem in-character (very hard to say for May but at least she's not being all.. ya know bashed-like *^.^*;;) and and.. I wanna see what happens Heheh.. Wonder what this guy they're meeting wants.. and stuff.. Umm... Hm. Me will wait for next part and get reviewing skills back by then mayhaps.. Heheh.. Okies, tat's all! *^_^*; |
| Articuno 2003-06-26 ch 1, | abuseThis is a great story! I can't wait for th next chapter! |
| Yugislittlechic 2003-06-23 ch 1, | abuseHey! Awesome story, i love your writting style! ^__^ Please please please update soon, cause it totaly rocks! ^_^ |
| Dancergal06 2003-06-17 ch 1, | abuseGreat story so far...update soon! |
| Ashla 2003-06-16 ch 1, | abuseCool idea! First one I've read with May as one of the main peeps ^_^ Great plot and I can't wait for more! ~Ashla~ |
| Mr. Pokemaster 2003-06-15 ch 1, anon. | abuseNice job on the first chapter! I must say, I'm intrigued by what I've read so far. Keep up the good work! |
| Violet Angel1 2003-06-15 ch 1, | abuseCool, I really like it. I didn't find any mitsakes and your description of the chracters was excellent. I hope it's a Ash/May since there's *too* many AAMRs'. Anyway, keep up the good work ~*~ Violet Angel ~*~ |
| Brian1 2003-06-15 ch 1, | abuseMhmm good! It's nice to see a story with May for a change ^_^ Poor girl though...that Jason guy sucks... Anxiously antcipating the next chapter. =D |