Reviews for All or Nothing

Reviews For: All or Nothing

Blackdex 2006-12-08 ch 1,	abuseOuch, brought a tear to my eye. Ciao
_WiNd_ 2004-09-10 ch 1, anon.	abuseAww..poor ryoga!! why is akane like that! crappieness! hehe.. Good story though... :)
Kinai 2004-04-17 ch 1,	abuseCongratulations. This is a perfect story. Kinai.
somewhat ray hibiki... 2004-02-28 ch 1, anon.	abuseyou now...ryoga should've left not akane...
DeActivated 2004-01-03 ch 1,	abuseHi! I'm really into angst fics though I've never really written one. . x_x i just love to read them n i must say this is one good angst fic. Your descriptions are precise and easy to visualize. Great fic. Sob. . It's just so sad that THAT RANMA left Akane! oh well. . that's how it goes. . can't do anythin bout it. good luck w/ ur othr fix!
Lone Warrior2 2003-08-13 ch 1,	abuseI really liked that story. I wonder if Ryoga would reacted like Akane if he was in her place and another girl he loved equally asked him that. (hints at self) That was really good and I could almost feel his pain. I wanted so much to reach into the story and comfort him. If only Akane would let the shadow of a memory go. But perhaps like many things in this world it is easier said than done. I hope you write another one. I have been proven once again that there are other Lone Warriors in this world than just I.
Rowan Seven 2003-07-17 ch 1,	abuseVery nicely done. The descriptions were vivid and easy to visualize, and the characterizations were haunting. Your take on this older Ryouga was beautiful and heartbreaking, and seeing the state that Akane was in was depressing and painful. For romantic angst, you've done a terrific job. The emotions this story stirs up will stay with me for some time.
Keishi 2003-06-16 ch 1,	abusenice. also, it is sad that this good fanfic came from such a crappy song. eek!
aondehafka 2003-06-16 ch 1, anon.	abuseNice to see something this different from the usual themes. Especially nice to see a story where Ryoga has grown up to this extent, and grown a bit of a spine in dealing with members of the opposite sex--especially Akane. Now for a follow-up... if you wanted to do a follow-up, of course, and/or were interested in experimenting with other emotional ranges... why don't you have the magnitude of the STUPID mistake Akane has made dawn on her over the course of a couple of weeks, culminating in her setting out to find Ryoga and tell him wholeheartedly that she's put Ranma behind her for good? Ryoga has grown up; it would be nice if Akane could finally manage to do so as well. Still, your call on whether or not to continue this; it is powerful enough to serve as a stand-alone fic.
2003-06-16 ch 1, anon.	abuseit was not bad but i have written and read better can't wait to read the next one i liked all the aspects of the story--howeverless emotion
Patrick 2003-06-16 ch 1, anon.	abuseGood Story
Ghost in the Machine 2003-06-15 ch 1,	abuseI'm not one for romantic angst, but I think you accomplished what you set out to do. Nice job.

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