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Lil-miss-Botan
2004-02-04
ch 1,
abusei love your story i love how you ended it please read my stories
IA4000000000000000
2003-11-12
ch 14,
abuseI AM GOING TO CRY!*TEAR* THAT WAS GREAT!
Meiko M
2003-08-24
ch 14,
abuse*stares at computer with her eyes wide, mouth hanging open, yet smiling, and eyebrows raised* THAT was the ABSoLUTE cutest fiction I have ever read! ^_^ Go and buy yourself an ice-cream sundae with extra chocolate, whipped cream, sprinkles, three cherries, and enything else you want on it! THAT was AWESOME! ^_^^_^^_^ I'm going to go read the sequel now! YAYAYAYAYAYAY! ^_^ XD ~Meiko
Trocks
2003-08-15
ch 14,
abuseno! it cant be over! ;_;... man... well i wont be able to do ANYTHING on my computer! my computer keeps freezing and my dad got rid of our internet service ;_; i am on my cousins laptop...
eunc
2003-08-15
ch 14,
abuse.:*:. .:*:. .:*:.

eunc: *bubbling* Aw, how absolutely kawaii. . . . =^_^= That was SO WAFFY, kokoro-san! *begins to get more bubbly*

rei: -_-; Stop gurgling like that, eunc-san, you're embarrassing me. You're supposed to NOT act like a child since you're like _ older than _ people on fanfiction! Jeez, you're such a handful! *coughs* Anyway, another good job well done, kokoro-san! Nice to know that another chapter has yet made my day because of Kurama-san and Botan-san romance *sighs with content*. However, it was slightly disappointing that you ended the fanfic so soon; BUT that WONDERFUL promise of a sequel quite makes up for it.

Hiei: Hn. I thought all of it was stupid.

eunc: 0.o;

rei: 0.o;

Hiei: *glaring* Peh! What?! Do I have something on my face or something? What are you two looking at?!

eunc: *whispering nervously* when did you get here, Hiei-san?

Hiei: *shooting eunc another glare* I've been here, baka-onna. All of that cheesy romance was killing me, so I left the others as soon as I could. Hn. Besides, Kurama and his little deity were making me nauseous with their little "I love you" bits they keep on saying to each other; it would make any demon wretch. Kuronue has already moved out because of it.

eunc: '.'? Kuronue-san moved out? I didn't know he lived there to begin with.

rei: *sighs in hopelessness* eunc-san, I think it's better if you not talk for the rest of the review. You're starting to annoy me as much as Kazuma-san annoys Hiei-san.

Hiei: Feh, well put, onna.

eunc: *pouting* THAT'S NOT TRUE, REI-CHAN! *now with a quieter voice* besides, you should be nice to me since I did what you wanted and went and asked Mukuro-sama if you could borrow Hiei-san for a date.

Hiei: HN?!

rei: *blushing madly* ='_'=

eunc: =^.^= Oh ho ho ho! Did I say that? *laughs jollily*

rei: *face tomato red* *looks to kokoro-san* Um, ok, I don't think we need to go on with this review anymore. We have to go now, kokoro-san. *bows* Thank you for contributing your fanfic to the wonderful! *waves* bye!

.:*:. .:*:. .:*:.
zeus the moose
2003-08-15
ch 14,
abuseI thought that this chapter was so sweet
I thought Youko CHAN was so very funny!
very humerous...
is this fic over??
please have a sequel or at least an epilogue!
zeus the moose
2003-08-14
ch 9,
abuseI liked the fic alot!!
its coming together very cunningly...
I love kurama/botan fics..
sadly, they are quite rare...
Setine
2003-08-14
ch 14,
abuse>> < >>
kenshinobsession
2003-08-14
ch 14,
abusesup ava! dat was good! i think it could've been a little more dramatic, if it weren't for da "some gods" still, it was gr8! keep up da good work!

-yur cousin in San Jose, Mina!

PS: waiting 4 yur squeal! LOL! hope it's da way u n meh planned it on da plane! and hope dat yur bro gives u back yur YYH shirt! LOL! bai! will be R&R soon! c ya!
DragonBlade65
2003-08-14
ch 14,
abuseAW! It's so CUTE! I can't wait for the sequel!
wildflower92490
2003-07-30
ch 13,
abusei hate you. that is such a GREAT story and u just stopped... and now i have to wait a week! *tear* he he ok
~Jayme~
Setine
2003-07-28
ch 12,
abuse*twitches* Clifee..
Trocks
2003-07-28
ch 13,
abusewow!! we are both on vacation! *mom comes up and says: GO DO SOMETHING!* ;-; i dot hav to though!
Trocks
2003-07-28
ch 12,
abuse*at family vacation house usinmg the computer*RUN YOUKO! RUNN RUN RUN RUN! hay... that is the title of one of my stories! cool!
eunc
2003-07-27
ch 13,
abuse.:*:. .:*:. .:*:.

rei: O.O; no updates for a whole entire week?! *gasps*

eunc: *falls over* Kami-sama! My heart! *clutches chest*

rei: Oi, now what are eunc-san and I going to do for a week?

eunc: =^_^= well, rei-chan, you can hope that kokoro-san will call you to tell you that YOU have to baby-sit Hiei-san.

rei: 0.o; but--but--but Hiei-san REALLY doesn't like me now. . . .

eunc: nonsense. . . He likes you just as much as before, only. . . now he knows that you like him even more! ^.~*

rei: *shakes head* argh. . . my head hurts! T-T

.:*:. .:*:. .:*:.
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