i love it !

That was cute. Just kawaii. It was adorable. But I really like how you tried to make everything rhyme. I should know. Everything I try doesn't work. Rhyming is a complicated process, especially for me. But, this ficcie was cute, and I can say that in many different ways.

n_n;; so sweet

It's really cool!

its a really beautiful poem...

Give me your hand, and let me lead you out

You can't do it alone, without someone to help

I'll lead you back the way you came

Where you smiled, and our lives were the same

thats my fav part...

inuchik

A lot of hardships, you've been through

But no matter what, you're still you

I love you now the same as then

I'll always be there again and again

That was my fav. line. It was so kawaii! Heck the whole thing was! But yeah that was my fav.

-Battousai aka Hitokiri Battousai

It was kind of hard to read because there were no spaces in the stanzas. It would have been better if between each switch in the POV there were spaces. because there weren't, my mind blanked out about halfway through.

Hey KK! I'm not stalking you or anything, but I like your stuff! That was so kawaii!

Past wrongdoings don't matter

Mistakes happen every day

Throw down your walls and let me in

I've erected this emotionless facade

To protect those around me

But somehow you managed to wiggle in

Let 'I' become 'we'

Now we can live

In the new life that WE have made...

Together

I loved those lines! They were cute! Gomen, I'm a sucker for fluff! Can't wait to see more. Oh yeah, I also read and loved Argo's eyebrows! Yay! More! Cya soon!

Kitty Katana, mistress of the blade

hey it's me again and i think that it is a cute lil' poam and i don't think i have a fave part it all goes together

P.S. update Health Crisis please...

Deanna/Angel

AW, that was just so cute and so true. I can't say I have a favorite line. I liked em all! I reall like a/m pairings. That's my latest obsession now. Keep it up!