Reviews for Dark Vengeance

Reviews For: Dark Vengeance

Emily Elizabeth 2003-09-21 ch 1,	abuseAnother wonderful story in this series, Missy. I loved it! And I couldn't help but smile when you mentioned Build-A-Bear...you're never too old for that store! lol Awesome job! ~Emily
Fan Fic Fan 2003-07-25 ch 1, anon.	abuseYour story lines are excellent, and your characters are very true to the show. However, there are some grammatical and word choice issues that, if they were fixed, would make your stories much stronger. There are some slips in verb tense, most of which can be solved by more careful proof-reading and/or by having someone else proofread the work. Also, there are many times when you could tighten up the story by using stronger verbs, such as "Warrick examined the evidence" rather than "Warrick decided to examine the evidence." In the former case, "examined" is the verb, which is much stronger and exact than "decided," which is the verb in the latter case. I hate to harp on grammar, but you have very good story lines that would be made even better by a more careful attention to detail.
illman 2003-06-17 ch 1,	abuseLiked the story a lot. Interesting plot.
Karlei Shaynner 2003-06-17 ch 1,	abuseAwe! Very cute!!
adpi24 2003-06-16 ch 1,	abuseAwesome story. I loved it. Great job. Please write more.
pdhtgal 2003-06-16 ch 1,	abuseSuch as sweet story!! I'm such a sucker for happy endings like that... This story made me smile. Thanks for writing it! I needed to read something like that. ~Lisa
Riley 2003-06-16 ch 1, anon.	abuseyou should do a sequel-like having the bad guys trying to get revenge or something-or what all happens to everybody
The Madhatter2 2003-06-16 ch 1,	abuseWow, what an interesting case. At least Nick wasn't seriously injured -- Thank God. I loved all the G/C scenes. Hehe, beach trip! And Nick and Sara getting married! Woohoo! Great case and wonderful relationships! :D I loved it!

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