I know it's been years since you wrote this, but I enjoyed it so much that I thought I'd review it anyhow. I've been desperate for some Jaina fics for a while now, especially ones to do with her "goddess" trickery, and her relationships with kyp and/or jag, so I was ecstatic to find your fic. I think I've read 3 Jaina fics now, and yours was easily the best.

I'll definately be adding this to my recs list when I make it!

Great story!! I loved how you brought Kyp and Jaina together while still keeping the essence of both of their characters. And the interactions between Mara and Jaina were priceless! Keep writing!

Loved it! I have an AU K/J Rebel Dream story, too. It's very early in the morning, so I'm not feeling up to details, but this was great.

Oh, and that chapter, where you thought people might flame? I thought it was great, and yes, it served its purpose well.

My favourite part, I think, was this last chapter, where Kyp kisses her, and Han catches them. :D

aw you mean it's over! it was great, i loved it, you should do a sequel or something!

GOSH!
I loved this story!
great job!
You really did a good job, and unlike other stories, i have no bones to pick about this one.
Keep writing!

Wait. . . that's ALL? It's OVER? Ah, c'mon, it can't be over. . .
But if it is, it's very nice. I was getting a little scared that you might pull a switch & have Jaina recognize that Kyp is a unreformed Darksider (not that there's anything wrong with that), and, instead of the 2 of them being 2 halves of the same coin, decide that running the rim of the darkside with him is too dangerous to Jaina's own Darkside tendencies and she dumps him & flees to Fel.
Heh. Glad THAT didn't happen.
And it's delicious to see Wedge & Tycho & Iella, though I simply do not understand why they like the little sticks-up-her-** Jaina. I mean, had Jaina been written properly throughout the NJO, as Han Solo's only daughter, I could see that. But the brat perpetrated by RAS? Nope, can't see the Rogues putting up with such unloveliness.
But that's just me.
Anyhoos, great writing, great storytelling. I honestly think that if Jaina wasn't going to end up with Zekk, Kyp would be much more suitable to her temperament than Jag, and I would have loved to see the pro writers NOT chicken out of writing them as a couple. But your story is a more-than-adequate alternative.

Hi!
I like your AU story! The books were much darker and i think Jaina deserves a lot of hapiness, and Kyp too!
I like to see them happy.

Wait, does that mean the story's OVER? Wah.
I think this is great. I reviewed and the same day there was a post. Excellent.
I really liked the way you wrote Kyp. Of course, I almost always like Kyp, but you captured his character very well. I also adored the last scene. Something about Han's hand hovering at his blaster just made my day. And the whole "get a room" banter was excellent.
Please tell me there's more of this!

Wow! I just read all of this and I loved it. I'm a bit Kyp/Jaina fan, and there's not nearly enough of K/J stories out there... especially not as well written as this one. Tell me you're planning on continuing this!
And I'm looking for more K/J stuff (having spent the past couple days searching here and on tf.n), so if you have any more stuff, let me know! bethyandell@flashmail.com or SaberBlade at tf.n.
This is truly excellent. Keep up the good work!

Aw w w w w w. They love each other!

Good for them. Keep that Jedi brat away from the Antilles men. Kyp can have 'er.

Han & Leia were sweet, too. Nice to see their deep love & Leia's beauty acknowledged after K. Tyers got done grinding them into the dirt.

Oh, and off topic, but jeez, Corivida's a rude thing, ain't she? Comes here to leave an off-hand, half-hearted, one-line review, then pimps an RPG site? Ru u u u u de.

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I like this story very much. Your dialog is right on. The dress chapter was well done, even though it is a fanfic 'cliche', it was well written and appropriate. I like this last chapter very much, great character interaction.

Keep up the good work--I look forward to the next post.

Personally, I think this chapter is very good, just like all the other chapters. But I might be biased, I'm just a great big Kyp/Jaina fan when it gets down to it.

very, very, very good chapter! CONTINUE!

Nice story, especially the latest chapters. Jaina and Kyp are a great couple! I liked the characterization of Kyp and Zekk.

Well It's not Jag/Jaina but I like anyway.

Okay I am also here to promote a site:

There's a author on ff.net named Serpena, she created a site called The Truth about Vampires, Witches, and Giants. It's a roleplaying game aka RPG. It's based on the book written by Serpena actually. It's similar to HP, SW, and LOTR. It's got creatures of all kinds (witches, vampires, giants, elves etc.). To join the site is http://w.geocities.com/serpena_martinelli

You can also IM the site mistress at:

H H H072485- AIM
serpena_martinelli- yahoo
H H H072485@hotmail.com- MSN messanger

Also if you go to find, type in penname Serpena, on her profile is her IMs, and the site.

I hope anyone that original ideas, creavity, and can write well will join this site. I hope you join and I will see you there if you do.

Corivida

ps. (no spaces in 3 H's when you type them in, and theirs 3 w's obviously).