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Excellent story. I'm definitely gona read and review your other stories. Boyflea told me your stories were great - he was right. I'm sure you been asked already but how did Gabrielle come about - another story maybe.

This is so awesome. I love this story. it was really good. Renee Malfoy

That is so... wow! You write very well.

Awwwww...so sweet.

Wow... intense! Very good... I love the way you can use atmosphere to make the reader feel as if they're actually in the story. Hats off to you, Emma!

this is sooooo sad! ..( but really great write more!

Oh my goodness gracious great balls of fire! Harry? On the Dark Side! AUUUGGH! This is such a great story, I think I'm going to scream and throw my self out the window! Not really. Sorry. I hade way way WAY to much chocolate chocolate chip ice cream. That stuff is loaded with sugar. Anyway, great story.

This was pretty good, except, can you PLEASE make Gabrielle a girl? Pleeaaaassssseeeeeeeeeeeeee

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so cute

That was GREAT! Honest! I really liked it and I hope YOU WILL FINISH this one because I think you REALLY have a good plot and that you can make a story out of it. I encourage you to continue and WRITE MORE SOON!

Thought-provoking stuff. Glad you're writing again as was missing your fantastic stories. Am staggered at how incisive this is - a sharp portrait of a war veteran [I spot a second meaning to 'Storm now perhaps?]returning home, feeling betrayed. Still feel sorry for Harry and cannot blame him for weakening to Voldemort after gallantly fighting him for years. You write wonderfully. Big hugs.

That was so sad! What happened after Ginny contacted the Aurors?

Wow that was deep and good real good

Oh my gosh, I LOVE IT! It's so good! Please write more, and when you do, can you send it to: ? I don't go on this site very often. Thanks.