good.dunno wad's IZ but i guess it's not a problem.. anyway, i like this fic but cant really relate to it coz my pa is quite the opposite of prof. membrane. always the one initiating family outings and bro and me will say no. yeah. sorry for telling M abt it lar. prefer ur previous pen name tho. hate malfoY.

wow. cool. father's day tribute. sweet. and touching.. in the portraying her feelings. like, family stuff. my family didn't do much on d-day, just gave my father a card. i wrote some stuff inside, so he was touched. =) anyway.. is your family very close? hmm. thinking. i've written my entry in the oracle(lets call it that,cool. kinda.) wonder how to get it to you? like, so long... till we meet. >_< okie. the name Dib is funny. well. =) i like. like. ahaha. have a nice day, ya? not much of the day left now, but, have a nice one tml. =)

Swet. I like it.
*Long pause*
HOLY CRUD MUFFINS! I FORGOT FATHERS DAY!
*Slump* I am such a crap daughter.
Ah well. I like it.
Zuki.

wada: nice writing style, now i look at yours and feel totally inferior. my writing style is just so simple and plain while yours has the pauses in the plot to allow for desc. btw, you spelt 'school' wrongly [getting influenced by your writing in emails?], unless if you meant it to be like that, or if it is spelt skool in the cartoon. anyway, i've never seen it before, dont know how the charas look like, but the way you desc the charas seems very realistic [can imagine how they are in the cartoon] and natural. *inferior* very beautiful piece of writing.

Wow, this was a really good story, and I liked it a lot.

good job!

aw that was really good! Maybe a little bit ooc, but come on, we all know underneath the hard-** adittude of Gaz there's a longing of some sort of atention. Well done and I like it how you wrote this near/on fathers day!!