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Reviews For: The Untold

Nienna C. 2003-08-04 ch 1,	abusegrowls MAYBE?!?! What do you mean MAYBE?! Here's how the sentence should go: I am GOING to continue...See was that so hard?! lol, I loved this. You're right the text really hid a lot. It was also very suggestive, like you said. I why did they bother adding the line in (the one about Danny asking Sam if there was anything between them), if they didn't intend to go somewhere with it? Unfortunately after talking in one of Sci-Fi's chats with Amanda Tapping I don't think it's ever going to happen. sighs...Oh well But, that's totally beside the point! You've got a solid foundation for a wonderful fic here. And I'd hate for you to just leave the foundation without building the house! It'd just be a plot of land with a little cement and everybody that went by would wonder...about what could have been done with it. And I've got enough to wonder about! I think that a romance between any of the team members is a tricky thing to write about. Because the details on what they really for each other are sketchy. But you’ve done a good job with it! YOU HAVE TO CONTINUE…. Which is why I will stop rambling and you will start writing and then I will come back and ramble again!
overly-distracted 2003-06-17 ch 1,	abuseOh come on! Don't stop there! It was a really good first chapter. I can't wait for the next one.
Beth-TauriChick 2003-06-16 ch 1,	abuseWell, last time I asked for a sequel I got one, so let's try it again! You have to continue this story. I loved that scene in Fallen, I'm so glad someone did a fic about it!
scifichick774 2003-06-16 ch 1,	abuseblinks Maybe?? What's that supposed to mean? You'd better continue it.

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