Omgosh! Another GREAT Hikari x Takeru Fanfic. I love these fanfics cuz they are my favourite characters and you've done a great job entertaining me with this story...Plz don't "be out for good" i REALLY want more =], Plz SATISFY MY TKXKARI FAFIC HUNGER D;. Well off to read more TKXKARI Fanfics, Lol

That was great! Awesome job!

this fic is cute.
i luv it!! C:
i like the way you write your stories.
hope u make more takari fics..
btw, i also loved your "Paparazzi".
keep up the gud work!

Nice fic, even though some parts were really weird... I mean it seemed like Tai would date Mimi and then he meats Catherine behind everyones back? And why for gods sake would Hika marry Daisuke if she knows she loves Takeru? Or why would she even not talk to him, just because her brother said he would be bad influence...
Well nevermind, that's your idea...

And I wanted to point out a mistake you did during the wedding: you introduced Izzy as "Izzy Koushiro", but his real name is "Koushiro Izumi", he got his nickname Izzy because of his family's name.

All in all the story is quite good, even though there are some parts I didn't really like...

That was one of the best storys I ever read.Keep up the good work.

Man this is good, a roler coster ride to the end

Man this is good, I want to read more

This is good so far, keep it up

Hello! It was a good story! And I'm happy that everyone was happy at the end! =)

But sometimes you'd switch between the Japanese names and the English (dub) names which sort of got me confused me for a few senconds there, until I realized it.

Anyways, it was a really good story, so =)

Ah...that was so AWESOME! You have, I believe, officially become my favorite author. Thanks for all your work in the world of Takari.

love it

aw that was prodigious
bravo encore encore

Aw, such a KAWAII chapter!! I loved all of the songs you used because I liked them all! ^-^ Well, please UPDATE SOON and take care! ^-^

Another nice long chapter and I really liked the song Officially Missing You that was in the story. It was really pretty! Please UPDATE SOON! ^-^

Great long chapter and I loved how you used the song I Swear again! I just absolutely love that song! ^-^ Please UPDATE SOON and take care! ^-^