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| Juwist 2005-06-23 ch 1, | abuseI loved the story so much! You are very talented.. I also love your "Wire in the blood" fics! They are trully wonderful... |
| Caro 2005-06-20 ch 1, anon. | abuseOkay, so I'm just going to pretend this is how it ends. |
| DolphinAnimagus 2005-04-12 ch 1, | abuseI could definitely see Grissom as a literature professor . . . Such a bittersweet story, with Grissom leaving, but then Sara coming after him. And I loved how he left without saying goodbye, but the team went to his house to say goodbye anyway. "The Scientist" works quite well for this fic, especially "Nobody said it was easy/No-one ever said it would be this hard" . . . And your ending bit was lovely, "They weaved through the crowd, just two more people in another Vegas performance. It took him exactly nine steps before he wordlessly reached out and took her hand in his." :) |
| smrozier 2004-12-08 ch 1, | abuseWow. This is perfect. :) |
| Quill-32 2004-04-09 ch 1, | abuseI still think this is in-character and believable. Grissom would try it, and they wouldn't let him get away with it. And I'd like to see him teaching English! |
| Anki 2003-08-10 ch 1, | abuseGreat story as always--just the perfect mix of angst and sweetness with a dash of romance. Hope you write more soon. |
| chimpy 2003-06-28 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis was amazing. It's the first fic I've read where Grissom leaves and it's Sara who's going after him, and it worked perfectly! Totally great! |
| Sadie5 2003-06-24 ch 1, | abuseI'm at a loss for words. All I can say is Fantastic! This is like the storybook ending we all dream of. Thank You. |
| ToonGrL 2003-06-19 ch 1, | abuseCoolbyrne, this story rocks! I can't believe it took me this long to read it. my heart was in my throat the whole time.5 stars! |
| luxor 2003-06-18 ch 1, | abusePowerful. Wonderful. You are a master. You had me going there until the very end. Maybe we can follow them to LA?!? |
| mystery17 2003-06-17 ch 1, | abuseLoved the story, cool. mystery |
| GrissomsOverture 2003-06-17 ch 1, | abuseOh, my GOD--this is perfect. Wow. It's so rare to read a fanfic that plays the other side of the coin--Grissom leaving instead of Sara. It's brilliant. Absolutley beautiful. Wow! I can't say anything else to tell you how much I loved this fic, except that it made me SO happy! FABULOUS job! ~Mary |
| fe 2003-06-16 ch 1, | abuseFantastic, very well written, and what a relief to discover that it wasn't Sara leaving (for a change). |
| CSIRMT 2003-06-16 ch 1, | abuseOnce again, coolbyrne, I'm in awe of your writing...what thrills me is your ability to write and put in such feeling without actually writing something - it's more based on what's NOT there than what's actually written on the paper. I don't know if that makes sense... Anyway, The Scientist really epitomizes that concept..and it's a superb fic! Possibly your best so far...CSIRMT |
| Manigault 2003-06-16 ch 1, | abuseWow! This was a beautiful piece of work and so well written. I felt the tug of sadness from Grissom as he left and the relief when Sara showed up at the airport. Well done. |