|
|
| Home Just In Communities Forums Beta Readers Dictionary Search | Login Register Extras |
| danny-phanotm crazy dude 2005-09-19 ch 1, anon. | abuseman, this sucks. |
| hakoirimusume 2005-06-19 ch 1, | abusewow, that was amazing. it provided a real insight into Asuka's character. and it was so sad, but it sounded so real. i can kind of relate, and even if i couldn't, i could definitely see from her POV. very good job, indeed! ^.^ keep up the excellent writing! |
| bubledada 2002-03-03 ch 1, anon. | abusevery well done :) u captured asuka's personality very well... n a way, shes always 2nd best. 2 her mom, her dad, rei, shinji, misato, kaji, hikari... nobody loves her the MOST. n hai, she tries so hard 2 plz every1! thats y she can b bitchy :) not that she really is, but well... actually, i understand asuka pretty well. i can relate :) we're actually ALOT alike. mai momz a nutcase... nobody really gives a damn about me (not that i really care) and i dun give a damn about ne1. plus, im smart n pretty (?) uh. |
| Sad Stephen 2001-07-24 ch 1, | abuseusually stuff in the second person is just plain bad; this is one of the few exceptions. wow. |
| Suzume 2001-07-20 ch 1, anon. | abuseOh, that was sooo Great!!! With a capital 'G' on purpose!!! Soooooo sad!!!!!! And I don't even really like Asuka (gomen!!!!) Kewlness. Utter kewlness. Wow, I never actually thought about how she felt. How sad ;_; *sniff* |
| the Cheshire Cat 2001-07-19 ch 1, | abuseAnd I always thought writing on Asuka was hard, eventhough my friends claim I suit her personality more. I don't understand why there are many who dislike this fiery red-head. I for one, find her intriguing. She has so many facets to her personality. Correctionl in Eva, all the characters have numerous facets to their personality. It's that quality and factor that makes Eva so damn good and corny as it is, loveable. |
| diskincluded 2001-04-13 ch 1, | abuseI can understand why you said not to read it when depressed. -sniff- that really got me feeling low. you have a way of writing that sorta weaves the feelings into the story, makes it more real. |
| Lin-lin 2001-04-12 ch 1, anon. | abuseUnbelievable...a very beautiful story Worldmage. Blah blah blah Very beautiful Story. "I thankyou God for great writers such as Worldmage who writes about the best female anime charater in the world [*ahem* you should know by now...it's ASUKA!], thankyou, thankyou ,thankyou. Amen" Well then I'll review more of your writing, someday when I get the time to.....*ack* it's 1:00 am I must gooooo tooo sleeeeeepp.........*z z zZ* -.-zZ |
| Addy 2001-04-06 ch 1, | abuseAstonishing. Beautifully melancholic... Thank God for authors like you, especially on this site. I look forward to reading more of your work! |
| gaurrygabriev 2001-02-28 ch 1, | abuseSaa, I liked this. Not too many people think Asuka's a anymore, nowadays, but there aren't really that many people who understand what she's going through either, even those who are her fans. Thanks for a great read and a really great take on Asuka's inner turmoil. |
| Jesse 2001-01-10 ch 1, anon. | abuseWell, Gainax must have recruited you to be their "Asuka Cheering Section." For some people, it is "that difficult" to appreciate Asuka. It's probably just as difficult for them to appreciate her as it is for you to understand why they don't. Drop the cross you're carrying for her. Now, for the fic. It was relatively well-written, but lacked emotion and the part where Asuka referred to the Commander as Gendo was unrealistic. Not bad though. Practice should help. I look forward to more. |
| FierySable 2001-01-02 ch 1, | abuseOoooo dark. *sigh* Poor Asuka-chan, but u've got her down to a T. I only disagree on one part, and that's that Shinji moons after Rei, but u noe what? That's not even IMPORTANT in retrospect to the fic as a whole. Are your thoughts of Asuka ALL this dark? Is she only an uncertain little girl to u, or does she have _some_ thoughts of happiness at all? Do u think that she is totally submerged in her depression behind the facade of happiness? I'd love to talk to u about Asuka someday :) Please email me or something... |
| Derek Zischke 2000-12-21 ch 1, | abuseAsuka, as far as writing goes, would have to be one of my favourites. She can be, really, anything you want her to be, given the right circumstances. And for dark intropection, she's second to none-but-Shinji. ^_^ The second person was a good choice, I would have to say, and it looks like you captured Asuka pretty well. Do let me know if you ever are able to get Rei IC for an introspective, and I'll be the first one to read it. ^_^ |
| amani 2000-12-20 ch 1, | abuseWoah...this is a really amazing piece of work. Asuka's characterization is one of my favorite in the series, aside from Gendou's. But she's easier to work with, personally. Probably cause I hate Gendou's guts. But a great fic. It sounds so much like Asuka. |
| Natsumi 2000-12-20 ch 1, anon. | abuseOne word. Wow! I love introspective, and angst fics a lot ^__^; Well you certainly did a wonderful job of giving new light to Asuka. I'll be honest, I'm no Asuka fan, I love Shinji the most, Rei and Kaworu being the 2nd. However, it's also unfair the way people just call her " " and leave it at that. It's fascinating seeing things from her point of view. Portrayed her thoughts perfectly (or so I think) It's unique and deep, and I'm fairly sure that even Asuka would like it (even if she might not like having so much of herself exposed) Way to go! |