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| likkledibbun 2006-08-07 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat's very lovely. *tears* |
| Wish-full Thinker 2006-02-13 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful. Simply beautiful. |
| japanese-jew 2005-06-04 ch 1, | abuseHey, it do be the UGLY american! Kewl Story. . . I really liked the way you shaped the other characters' speech so that Echo could say what she needed to. I have ONE, minour nitpicking thing . .. which is that I'm relatively sure that Apollo is GOD OF THE SUN. .. *BUT* He delegates the task of daily riding the chariot to Helios. Remember, HELIOS' son was the one who 'borrowed' the chariot and let it get out of control, right? |
| Snowmane 2004-02-24 ch 1, anon. | abuseOne word for you. Beautiful. |
| LadyIniquity 2003-12-22 ch 1, | abuseSad. Me luvs it. |
| DarkAngelB 2003-09-16 ch 1, | abuseI decided to check this out for the hell of it and I loved it! I use to read Greek Mythology all the time but I guess I kind of grew bored of it but this was sad but it was lovely anyways! |
| Riceball 2003-08-22 ch 1, anon. | abuseWow..thats really good...Lol i dont know what else to say...that really leaves me in awe..Plus I luv your other stories too. But this one was like deep..Lol. Update your stories soon! |
| Imbalwen 2003-08-06 ch 1, anon. | abuseI thought this was the real version of the story! It is more passionate, and more romantic. |
| Mistress Joy 2003-07-30 ch 1, | abuseoi, I always try to avoid the story of Echo and Narcissus, but am always pulled in. Very beautiful point of view of the story, I enjoyed it greatly. Your adaption is wonderful, thank you for writing it. -Joy |
| Kurisutaru1 2003-07-13 ch 1, | abuseOh my Dear Lordy! OO; That was deep. People should pay more attention to this story. Short, but is was really really really god!! ^__^ Tis sad that he didn't seem to notice it was in own reflection...oo; You wrote this for an English paper? My God, what grade are you in?? OO; ~Kurisutaru |
| Branimira 2003-06-19 ch 1, | abuseThat was really good! I love,love storys,and you can write them very well^^ I'm not much in to myth stuff,however,you made me get into it!! That storys like I said is great! It made me sad but at the same time enjoyable,I love it so much! Keep up the good work^^(how many times have I said that*sweat drop*) Right now your my fav.author^^ I just wanted you to know that -^_^- |