Aww so poetic T.T

it's good (as usual of your drabbles). but the part about sakura (air) made little sense. just didn't connect, i think, even with her shippuuden self. unless we're talking about an AU or OOC sakura

Good job. You wrote it very well and the story itself is splendid.

Great story!

hm...there is a harmony and balance in the way you described them. Ofcourse this was intentional on your part, nut I just wanted to comment that I loved how you painted this whole world encompassing the four of them. It really brought a vivid picture in my mind.

That was a sexy fic. D And fun yaoi undercurrents. XD

Well written and lovely. I worship you.

I love you... *sniff* So. Damn. Good...

Gar... SasuNaru again.
And still good. That's loow to us other peeps.
Non-yaoi, not Anti-yaoi, and that crud.
... I still like it! I feel like a traitor!

this is great

Fire also lights things up, and lets you see the true face of things... even if you don't want to.
Yay for earth! *kisses the ground*
Class: 0.o
XD
Fyredra

Extremely good, probably one of the most unique fics I've read in a long while. _ Great job!

That was very good.

Egad, I love this! Mwa! (PinkyLemon kiss of approval _)

That was good! Wow, you sure think a lot! None of that stuff would have ever crossed my mind -_-

So good...I love 'His fire will renew me, her wind shape me, the teacher's water carve through me...'. And 'We've made a half-decent world.' Oh yeah. That rocks.