i liked this story

UPDATE! NOW!

IT IS GOOD BUT DO A NEW CHAPTER!

You's story F-ing sucks Goldbryn! No, no, it is very good. I'll be sure to keep an eye out for chapter 3 or you can just let me know when you put it up.
BANG! BANG!
~Jo Shmoe~

i really like the story. Are u going to write more?

Wel looks like Lana saved her own self from death. But how did she do it? And what does dargons have to do with her? I will await those answers when you post again. ^_^

This was really good too! I especially liked the part about how Donatello felt about having to dispose of the foot body at one in the mourning. But, wouldn't Irma nad April and Splinter and the others be a little more intrigued by a girl that shows up mysteriously killing foot and heals quickly? Why did everyone just go to bed?

Well, I guess they have a lifestyle where nothing surprises them anymore.

Red Turtle

two qestions: Will Don be able to save her? And where is Lana from? Keep the chapters coming.

This is good! Nice element at the beginning, and I was able to visulize and everything!

Used to be seemed like not many people wrote about Donatello, but there are more now.

I write a lot about him myself, if he's your favorite you might like some of my stories.

Actually, you might like The Forgotten, because its similar in that they find someone that is being chased by feirce enemies.

Red Turtle