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| RyansGrl 2005-07-18 ch 5,  | abuseDamn you, Why'd you have to kill her. It was gettin' good. oh yeah, if you don't write more can i use your " jessie and cole like the same girl" thing? |
| BrokenHearted 2003-08-11 ch 1, anon. | abuseJust a little history lesson *laughs* Jesse and Zerelda WERE married. To top it off, they were cousins *collective shiver* Just thought you might want to know ;) |
| BrandyJames 2003-07-04 ch 5, | abuseThis was a sweet story please continue. |
| TheAngelOnYourRight 2003-06-30 ch 5, | abuseOmg it's so kool ! You rock okay I'm going into childish mode. I want more soon plz ! Mandy |
| Moonlights Sundance 2003-06-29 ch 5, | abuseI liked the story, but a part of it felt a little rushed. That she had to die as soon as she made her choice. Anyway, I still liked the story. |
| Moonlights Sundance 2003-06-27 ch 3, | abuseI think she should choose to pick nobodym, because to hurt one whould be unfare and if she really cared for the two boys then she should not choose and they should not make her, however for them to try and make her choose one could give you some more options. These are just a few suggestions. Also, I understand you are having writers block, but when you make chapters, you should try to make them a little longer. Just my opinion and I hope you update soon. |
| Mycroft 2003-06-26 ch 3, | abuse...BOB! |
| TheAngelOnYourRight 2003-06-26 ch 3, | abuseIt's awesome but you are so a tease !! I'm dieing because I want to more . Oh and Cole Jesse always gets the girls it's Coles turn |
| Christina 2003-06-25 ch 3, anon. | abuseI think he should either choose Jesse or Jim I know age difference but I want Jim to be in this story |
| Rodeo Princess 2003-06-24 ch 2, anon. | abuseHey that was such a tease it's just not nice I want to hear more from the story . ... SOON Mandy |
| Chrisinta 2003-06-22 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis sounds good so far but may I suggest longer chapters and maybe include Jim if you can |
| TheAngelOnYourRight 2003-06-17 ch 1, | abuseIt's cute so far can't wait to read more her name is farmilliar though but it's cute |