this was cute

I LOVE IT! I don't think it was THAT mushy, i think it was perfect!! I can't wait until you submit more on Hermoine and Draco, they're a PERFECT couple!! SEND IN MORE!!

nice story. draco seemed to go from harsh to nice too quickly though, but it was still good. thank you so much for your review. yeah my characters aren't supposed to be in love actually it's just major infatuation like a more corrupted romeo and juliet. i was going for a blatant way of telling the story kind of including the murder scene. thank you again for your constructive and really kind review. :-) and i applaud you too (claps)

That's quite sweet, and I actually like the way you structured it. I'm starting to like some of these interesting pairings with Draco, too bad they exist only in fanfics.