*shakes you* Well? Who is it? The story seemed a bit choppy, the grammar looks fine, and the plotline looks okay, SO CONTINUE!! Waitin for next chapter!

*begs* Is the girl gonna be Misao? HUH?? *puppy eyes* let it be Misao!

Huh?? i din't really understand this story. A bit confusing, especially the last part...who's this girl?? Is this the end?