That was very sad, but captured perfectly.

I like ^_^

eewwh~
poor Gojyo *hearts* lovely beaten Gojyo..
this is very sad and crual.
But well writen.. You should have done it longer!

Not bad! Could do better if you tried though. Not bad for an un-edited fic. *Glomps* *Makes face* Too short though. Could try to make it longer next time ne? Sorry... 1.30++ in the morning right now so ya. ^_^ You know me. ALWAYS sleeping late... ^_^

That's not bad! ^-^ You should have got in the writing contest! Maybe they didn't know what you were writing about... But we all do 'cause we watch Saiyuki, right? Ganbatte!

GOJYO! *lapses into strange language* Kyuu, you poor daft soddeh of a laddie, come here and be glomped. *glomp*

Chibi-Gojyo: Ack...leggo...can't breathe!

A swet Gojyo POV which I liked. Keep it up.