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Oh, now this is excellent! I think you've captured Allen's personality exceptionally well, and your portrayal of Celena as a headstrong, courageous, yet still quite charming young woman is ideal. The plot is excellent, and the brother/sister relationship between Allen and Celena just puts a big grin on my face! They are swiftly becoming two of my favorite characters, and I love reading well-written fics about them, so this story was definately a welcome change to some of the other stuff out there. I was totally psyched when I read your review of slings and Arrows (which I AM working on... really!), and I'm even more psyched now that I know what a good writer you are! Well, I'm babbeling... Keep up the amazing work! 'Till next time!

awesome reading, even the second time around! _ c ya!

this ish sooo good! I lub it! i lub Denevive...hehe...Keep up the great work! _

umm..i like this a lot better than the other alternate ending... if allen became like Folken...! ( i love folken though)

Wow.

Love it.

great story! sweet ending.. you made me laugh when allen fell off his horse! and about the rats of denevive... _ .. there aren't many celena and allen out there, i'm glad i was able to read this.. uh.. actually, you know, i read this far back then, when you posted this last chp, and i wasn't able to review..! it slipped my mind! i'm sorry!

...please go on...god just read mine then ur like.wow mine is so good compared to that pretty senshi girls one...i like it like it like it...but dont keep me waiting...il b back take my advise to build ur self esteem...its ONCE AGAIN-SECRETS by the way rated PG...CRAAAAP...REALLY BUILD UR SELF ESTEEM...its god even if ur not self concious

this is soooooooooooooo good!... i lurve it

This is pretty good! Oh, and I take constructive criticsm well. Any ideas to help my story are all too welcome! _ Flames however, are mocked, and flamers are laughed off the face of the earth(or Mystic Moon, as it were). At this point, I would enjoy criticsm considering I have no idea where I'm going with my fic. Well, I have a slight idea, but it's really dumb. Then again, all of my ideas are dumb. ::coughs:: Sorry, I'm rambling. I'll go now. Bye. Good story! I like it! Bye! ::waves::

I think I like the Chapter Four ending better, it's a lot more thought out, and this one...come on? Allen's arm being severed? That's a little much.

This is an excellent story! I hope you will keep on writing, and maybe include Dilandau.

Wow, you *must* write more soon, because I like this series a lot:) Esp the character tensions.

This is great! please get the next part out soon. I loved the relationship between Celena and Allen. Very entertaining! I like seeing Allen loose a little of his cool, and who else could make him loose it than his wild sister? Very good! Hurry with the next installments!