aw. its to bad that ur going to discontinue this fic. if its any help or encouragement i wanna say that i like this fic and i think its good! ^^ when u decide that ur happy with it ill be waiting! heh heh! well if/when u update ill read it! its a great fic even if u think u rushed it. well good luck! ^^

Oh. All right. What? I need to say encouragements? No. It's not good to push.
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All right. As I am reading, I realized that you kept repeating words. It's getting on my nerves. Instead of reiterating "you both," why not use "you two"? Or just "you"?
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Oh! I get what you meant when you said you were going too fast. Yes. SS' relationship is a bit rushed, but, you know, love isn't told by time. You even mentioned that before, right? I can't remember. Sorry! Anyway, you haven't really said much about the school, so it IS kind of skipped.
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Oh! Well, I've just said that twice, didn't I? How about - (gasp) - It's so great! ^_^ No. Gasping wouldn't do anything. It's just "Oh!" Lolz.
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I really want to know what had happened to cause Sakura to look back at all this. You know, as the reader, I don't see why it's appearing dumb. If you're having doubts, it's best to plan out future events before releasing Chapter 5 and then going back to change it or deleting the story altogether. In other words, maybe you just haven't outlined the whole story and had rushed to get it out in the first place. Is that why it's seemingly dumb to you now?
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I really like it, though. I mean, fantasy and battles. Haha.
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Yes, sorry for the late review. I mean, I kept putting it back cuz of projects and... oh, crap! I realized I needed a form from school and had forgot! It's Friday! This is so @#$#%#@!

N-Yao!!
Awesome story!! I LOVE IT!
YAY 4 S+S!
UPADTE SOON!
Kikamo-chan ((^-^))

I want to know what's next!! XD
whoot!

Sounds interesting. But you could make the romance sound a bit more professional? It sounds like a sappy school story.

But everything else sounds great. The fighting sentences, SENTENCES mind you, should be made shorter, I guess. For the effect, you know? If you lump actions together in one sentence the "oomph" effect will be gone. But then don't cut them off at one per sentence.

ok that's enough load of garbage. haha. update!
*wuz black-cat*

OMG! I LOVE YOUR STORY! but the bell rang and i must hurry! ja ne! ^_^

o nice fic! haha can you make Syaoran a bit more powerful? he seems quite pathetic, what with losing to Sakura at martial arts and all...and it seems his magic isn't too powerful either.

*yawn* wah..i can't believe i slept till now! it took me like a while to finish this cuz my eyes were giving out on me but it was interesting so i had to force myself to keep reading! ^-^ anywho, what's gonna happen w/ the others? do they a play a part in this?? and me likey how the storie's developing so far...and you HAVE to tell me what the name means you dumbutt you PROMISED! BLAH you suck :P hehehe continue and you better have the next chappy done soon!! (and finish our deal w/ the other chappie from the other fic) till next, time, night night! ^.~
~shey

heh wow o_o many things happened in such a short time lol xD see ya in march!

BRILLIANT! That's what I call this story! Um.. about the tsunami in chapter 3 that's associated with the tsunami in South asia right?? just asking since I don't know when you typed that chapter! Anyway, I love this story so much! How I wish that I could write like that... Um... can you proofread for me? Cause I really want my story to be good or nearly good as yours!

I hope you update soon... cause is one story that no can get enough of... You are in the stars girl! and I'll be by your side supporting you all the way!

Ja
Sakura-miaka

whe... :3 keep writing! =]

All right! I thought you weren't going to update. I've reviewed late. Lolz. I'm excited, and it IS good. I had to go back a couple of times, though, for names, and stuffs like that.
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At least you're inspired, eh?
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u promised in ch.2 that it was to be updated in August! but you updated longer than that... but nontheless.. it's still a good page :) Can't wait for you to update the next chapter.. hope it's soon~

GREAT CHAPTER
It's been a long time since your last update and I didn't even remember your story. But after reading it again, I still like it as much as before.
Update as soon as you can please (in least than a year will be great lol )

oh...ah... this IS AWESOME! EK! you MUST continue this... :3 ... aw...i can't waiit! :D ... keep writing! =]