What Orange said. How about a follow-up: Wedge explaining to Tycho why he kissed Winter. ;)

"You tell Tycho," she replied, shooting twice blindly over the top of the table, "and I'll tell him that you kissed me back."

I love reading fics in which Winter is not portrayed as some cold, detatched know-it-all. I love that in the above quote, she is both joking with Wedge and kicking ass. :)

Keep up the good work with all your other fics, as well as with Shatterstar.