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| Sachi-Kohana 2006-07-11 ch 6, | abuseFirst off--I am so happy that you have decided to write the story again. I do commend you for an answer to the idiocy of "angry reviewer". I think you were doing a wonderful job at the time, because I know how that can be with little access to the animes, but the story was good none the less. Angry Reviewer--For you, I say LEARN TO SPELL. I was actually laughing when I read some of that because of how horrible you spelt your words. And what does it matter if she makes characters sound different? I'm a fanatic with this series and study everything about it, but it is fun to see what people can do with the characters, hence the name FANfiction. That means the FAN of the series can do WHATEVER they want with the characters and Ms. Bijouterie is doing a wonderful job making the characters not themselves. You need to think about what you do because OBVIOUSLY you do NOT know what fanfiction is. By the way, it's called constructive critism, not flaming. If you really wanted to see some changes, you could have suggested some different strategies, but of course, I can see that is just too much because that would be the INTELLIGENT way about it and there is not a speck of intelligence in that review. I have no patience for imbiciles like you and Bijourterie doesn't either. So if you hate it that much don't read. There are PLENTY of people who love Bijouterie's story. Bijouterie--I am hoping for a new chapter, and I can't wait to see what happens next!! :) |
| angery reviewer 2006-07-10 ch 6, anon. | abusethis is horrible hiei is completly ooc and yusuke would not shake in fear over beating the blood out of his enemy he wouldn't be in fear unless it was about keiko, hiei is completly out of charactor thouhgh A he would not stick his tongue out B he doesn't "look in fear" at ne thing besides the occasional ungodly pain like when he used the dragon of the darkness flame he doesn't even feel pain he is emotionally a wall and don't portray him as anything less! |
| Keiko Urameshi 2006-03-17 ch 1, anon. | abuseplease update and put in lots o' discriptive Yusuke+Keiko Hentei (bang bang ) truely Keiko and Yusuke Urameshi |
| Kakina 2005-02-10 ch 12, anon. | abuseHey, Love ur story-so-far!! Just hurry up and get updated! -Kakina |
| Story Weaver1 2004-11-20 ch 4, | abuseThe lemon wasn't that bad. I like the ones that aren't drawn, it gets naseuouating after the first few paragraphs. Those youkai have some interesting powers. |
| Story Weaver1 2004-11-20 ch 3, | abusewhoa, that was a pretty steamy chapter. |
| Story Weaver1 2004-11-19 ch 1, | abuseGreat fluff. Pooh is so kawaii. |
| Birdy06 2004-10-22 ch 12, | abuseThat was a great story!Will the Reikai Tentai arrive in time?Please update soon. Arigatou! JA NE! |
| anon 2004-09-02 ch 12, anon. | abusecool... wanna read more... pls update soon...^-^ |
| Sachi-Kohana 2004-09-01 ch 12, | abuseomg! KICK BUTT STORY! and a cliffie too..Oo keep up the awesome job and update soon! ^_^ |
| Sachi-Kohana 2004-09-01 ch 12, | abuseomg! KICK BUTT STORY! and a cliffie too..Oo keep up the awesome job and update soon! ^_^ |
| Mura Tokudaiji 2004-07-31 ch 12, | abusei dont know what to say cause all i read was a FREAKIN AWSOME STORY...that ways so awsome its kept me on the edge of my set...please update...right... NOW! hehehe...sry but great fic |
| charice 2004-07-29 ch 12, anon. | abuseTHAT'S CRUEL AND UNUSUAL PUNISHEMENT! To end on that note! I ecxpect this to be updated as soon as possible!! I like the story so far. Keep it up! |
| Gemini 2004-07-02 ch 10, anon. | abuseGreat story!^_^ Here's an idea...what if the woman demon was the same one who comforted Keiko earlier in the story. That would be pretty dramatic! In this fight have Kurama transform to Yokou Kurama (drool) O.o |
| kits500 2004-06-02 ch 10, | abusePlease keep writing being a Kurama lover I have to know what happens!! |