Nice, kinda unusual plot, and beautifully written!

Wow. O.O I don't really understand it, but wow anyway. You write amazingly.

hey! thanks for the encouraging review! _ well, now for YOUR story...wow, what to say? very few one-shot post-tb, pre-x fics about subaru catch my attention (the only other one i can think of is meia's surreality), but this was extraordinary. i commend you on your creativity - i totally felt this story could have been another installment in the manga, like a side-story of some sort. the imagery captured the emotion perfectly. sigh, now i feel so angsty...*/

That was beautifully written. I loved the details and the symbolism(which i think was there...lol). Nice one-shot.