hehehe...
hahaha...
hohoho...

Roflmao! Fun times indeed.

Emotional roller coaster? With everything that has happened so far, there hasn't been a *really* bad moment, yet, at least. But I almost don't want one to happen.

I guess I'm like Keitaro in that I don't want anyone to get hurt, but knows that someone HAS TO get hurt for the story to properly progress... or do they? I guess the entirety of this whole 'sharing' decision solely relies on Motoko.

Favd, Subd, and going to check out your other stories.

i dont like love triangles i like one on one

that's a switch in some senses of first chapter but still good

su/shinobu thing is disgusting

Well ketaro could kick all of them out of hinata sou they don't have to leave he is the manager afterall

I loved the first two chapters can't wait to read the rest

It's a good fic so far, but I personally think that Motoko would put up more of a resistance than that. I mean, on her second day, she's already all lovey-dovey with Keitaro while she treated him as a vile pervert only a couple days ago. This is just my opinion though. Otherwise, great story.

o.O i didn't think that they would DO it so soon... motoko and keitaro i mean... this is all so sudden, although a good story...

nyah?
so it's done?
aw... i was hoping there
would be more nyah...
oh well. good luck on future stories nyah!
nyah!

funny humourous all in all GREAT! looking forward to the next chapter... looking... looking... still looking...

Hey! I reviewed back in 2003-12-28, and since then I haven't been on FF for the longest time. Frst thing when i come back to FF is read all my favorites, and this was the top of my list. So happy to find that this is over (*sniff* i actually didnt want it to finish). I notice a few sentence didnt sit with me too well, but overall I love it. Nothing beats a Kei+Motoko, unless its Kei+Motoko+Naru. Nice job on this series!

MAKE MORE MAKE MORE MAKE MORE XD XD XD XD XD XD I WANT TO SEE WAT HAPPENS NEXT.(MORE LIKE READ XD LOL)

I HEHEHE don't know how to take this one. It's good I admit really good. I think this one takes a little getting used to. So keep up the good work I will keep an eye out for the next update.

I love the one shot it's very cute and it could defiently stand on it's own

wow, awsome story, but naru sure is acting freaky. lol