 horsefly 2008-08-23 . chapter 1Ah, very nice! I've grown to really like Natalie and would miss her if she left but I still miss Sharona at times. Even before she left the show though, you could tell there were leaning away from the whole Monk/Sharona thing, which is a shame :-(
Anyway, that's what fanfic is for right? The 'what if's' so to speak. I also just re-read 'La Tormenta Grande.' You should write some more Flying Nun or Monk fanfic! |
 abigailc 2008-04-05 . chapter 1What a great Monk and Sharona story. Beautifully written as well. I stopped watching after Sharona left. The show changed too much for me. I don't care for Natalie either. But that is just me.
Great story and great job. |
 Black Charlie 2004-03-06 . chapter 1 Brilliant. I enjoyed this so much! |
 DaVic764 2003-10-22 . chapter 1 IT WAS SO COOL!
But the only thig I did not like was...
It was too short!
Please add another chapter!
*Ana* |
 catsncritters who hasn't logged in 2003-08-19 . chapter 1 Wow. That was wonderful! *Sniffs* |
 ladymoonlight 2003-08-01 . chapter 1 That was absolutely wonderful. Very well-written. |
 Kittenmommy 2003-07-16 . chapter 1Aw! >sniff |
 Bil 2003-07-14 . chapter 1I adore this story! It was absolutely brilliant, thank you very much for writing it. |
 The Blue Raven 2003-07-11 . chapter 1:) cool story & very sweet. Loved him standing on the pier, mourning for what might have been :) Also loved Sharona "introducing" adrian and benjie and adrian ordering him to clean up his room. Something he'd been wanting to do for years, lol. A very sweet & tender fic. Loved it a lot. |
 Rainbowscape 2003-07-11 . chapter 1This was a very touching and upbeat story. I loved how you characterized Monk's and Sharona's relationship. That whole reasoning on the B6 thing was great Monk logic too. (Except there's one point where you call the second pill bottle B5.) Great story! |
 Babika 2003-06-24 . chapter 1 Wow, this has to be the best Monk fic I have ever read in my entire life! You should be a professional writer. I'm serious! |
 Len 2003-06-22 . chapter 1Oh my goodness! That was beautiful! And completely, utterly brilliant. It's something that I can see happening at the end of the show, most certainly. Stunning, but subtle. Perfect.
I can't wait for your next story!
~Len |
 midnight-blue 2003-06-22 . chapter 1WOW! This was just wonderful. You captured Sharona's character perfectly, as well as Monk's, and their interaction was spot-on. Just absolutely wonderful. Keep writing, please! |
 L.Chapman 2003-06-21 . chapter 1Melody, you may have found the very best series finale for Monk-god forbid it is anytime soon, and fingers crossed it is many seasons away! But this story would finally bring Monk and Sharona together and also bring closure to Trudy's murder, which are obviously key plot devises for the series.
I loved this story. It made me laugh. It made me cry. And it will resound in my memory. Thank you!
Lynn |
 Presca 2003-06-20 . chapter 1 OMG! This is so amazing, Melody that I almost couldn't put it into words. Damn, I wish I could write with such eloquence!!
I cried in the end, so beautiful...definitely the top of it's class. Thanks for that.
Kim |