This fic is fantastic ! I'm Soujirou's fan just because his smile, the way he hides his feelings. And I love your poem !

And I'm sorry if my english has any fails, I'm a brazilian girl '

good

i loved it!

Oh!Not crappy at all!_You should do more like this!

That wasen't crappy it was good _

I really like this poem it's really nice

Not bad. I like every verse. How about posting it up at ? People might love it.

Actually, I thought that was pretty good.

OOH! THAT WAS BEAUTIFUL! I really liked it, I'm dead serious

This was really good. i loved it. it just went so well with Soujirou and everything. it wasn't crappy at all, trust me. you are a really good writer.

It is I, Battousai! I am finally back online whoohoo!

NEwayz...it was good, not great, but good (no offence)

Yeah...I like Soujirou too. _ Not as much as Battousai but yeah...

Hey one question: Do you like Aji? Aw he so kewl man! And he has the same voice as Taichi too. It really worked out too.

Did you know Misao's voice is the same as some girl on Medabots? Thats sad...

Ok enough randomness. OO

-Hitokiri Battousai (Yup, the new me!)

Hey! I liked it! This IS the best Sou-chan poem I have read! TRUELY! Good work!

Goku-chan

Nice, You got real talent, please do more like this.

This was NOT in the least bit crappy. It's so perfectly true. You made Soujiro sound really remorseful for all his past actions. It IS good!

! I liked that. It was a nice poem. Though were you following any type of poem or was it free verse? Ne..ne it doesnt matter, the poem was a good one & I dont think that you should change it. Or at least dont take it down. Cause its a good look into Soujirou.

all smirks ;}