Holy! This story is so sad, I definantly prefer the alternate ending but the original was very well done!

I like the story very much but the alternate ending is way better the other one is just to sad and dramatic. Hope u write more stories of Duo and Hilde there the best couple and so cute.

This was some story. O_O The original ending was somehow I guess you could call it poetically appropriate? But the "happy ending" alternate was good too. It really gave Duo and Hilde the chance to start their life over again.

that was a nice ending... happy and starting over my kind of endings.. very good!! ^^

that was dark! but it was very good and well i'll be looking for the alternate chapter soon!!

Oh wow!! This is a great story. I love it all this action. Hilde doing some good butt kicking. I hope she can save her children. I want more more and more can wait.

wo ho go hilde u killed the ** ... blood gore and more .

are both of the children dead? great job with this, I loved acting it out. Ciao!!

good dark chapter! nastasha was evil killinghte child.. hilde had every right to hack her to peices and the guards who helped hahahah... duo better stay back ... hey wait .. doesn't hilde have healing powers?
can'twait for more evil ness from you! more soon...

great job! love it. Ciao!

oo what's the evil witch gonna do? i can't wait for more!!

she's an evil woman! i hope hilde kicks her butt! more soon!!

Ch. 6


*glares*

yes, u would have to be crazy to turn him down. And that braid...think of the possibilities...

UH...

WRITE MORE OR DEATH!

bad oyuki! good chapter,tho... evil woman! hilde must stop her ... o a little duo / hilde action!! hehe i knew they still loved each other!! but what will happen next?? ( i know bad things...bad things!! lol!! more soon!!

Ch. 5

^^ go!! this is great ^^