|Reviews for Never Stops|
| xbbygirl 11/22/06 . chapter 1
nice first chapter!
| scorpioteen 6/8/05 . chapter 20
ok ur fanfic is by far the best i've read so far! that was an awesome ending. im so glad brian and sara are together instead of them just being "friends" great job
| scorpioteen 6/8/05 . chapter 17
hey! me again. just wanted to say that ur fanfic is still awesome. cant wait to read the next chapter. *hoping that brian will finally be with sara in the end*
| scorpioteen 6/8/05 . chapter 8
ok i no u already wrote the next chapters and everything but i still wanted to review. im hoping that whenever i finish reading ur fanfic, sara and brian will be together becuz i dont think monica and brian make a very good couple. well neways good job on the
| scorpioteen 6/8/05 . chapter 5
ok i really liked the chapters but the only thing i didnt get was this sentence u wrote in it:
“ I want you to move because you want to not because you think it’s better for Monica or me.” Brian didn’t want Sara to move but if it made her happy, Brian had no objections.
otherwise ur chapters r awesome so far scorpio
| scorpioteen 6/8/05 . chapter 1
sounds good so far.
| OTHlover04 2/13/05 . chapter 20
that was a good story
| Spirit Anduril 4/5/04 . chapter 2
Read a book. Learn how to paragraph proper sentences and desribe body movements. Also, please decide what tense you want this story to be in. It's frustrating when you switch from one to the other- and it doesn't help that your short, blunt, uncreative sentences-
(eg. “ Hi.
| HeavenlyKitten 3/21/04 . chapter 20
Hey it's been a long time since I've read this story, but my computer went down. Anyhow it worth the wait ot come back to this story it was really beautiful.
| Shakespeare 3/15/04 . chapter 1
I don't mean to diss your story completely-but please!
And what's with the format...are you a playwright or a fool...come on...work with me here lil' miss Isabelle8
Your grammar should be in the slammer
But it is a good story line...I was wrapped...no seriously...it was good and I only hope you can pursue Hemmingway with as much gusto as you've pursued Bruckheimer.
| cheerthis95 3/11/04 . chapter 20
I liked your ideas! I thought you did a great job!
| amber 3/9/04 . chapter 20
i really liked that story it was a really good story the whole story was good. i thing you should be a writer you would be so good at it.
| amber 2/22/04 . chapter 19
i really like this story please keep up the good work. i really hope sara lives.
| Jamie 2/22/04 . chapter 19
This really is a great story. It made me cry though...I have a daughter named Samantha so it was just really hard to read... good job making it so emotional! I can't wait for the next chapter...I hope she's okay!
| Isilmeselde 2/13/04 . chapter 18
AH! Brian can't die! He just can't cause he's so hot! That and him and Sara have to get together. Anyway, very suspenseful chapter, I loved it!