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TheGreenKnight63 2008-05-15 ch 18,	abuseTo the author: this is again Bien your most avid and dedicated reader. A very simple and easy request which I would like to make in behalf of the entire gaming community. Two things really: First can you please give your story a very quick and cursory once-over to correct a few grammatical and formatting errors; nothing really too complicated, however I believe that a few things have escaped the notice of your proof-reading. Second, well, this is really more of a personal technical issue. You see, me and my friends have been following your story for a very long time now, over that long period of time, we have fallen in love with the plot. As avid pen-and-paper gamers, we would like to request that you give a very short summary of the character's RPG statistics. You see we want to include your characters in our campaign that our Dungeon Master is running, and it would really be helpful if you the author could kindly provide a very short summary of the primary characters level as well as any special equipment and/ or weapons that they carry. We do not want to simply make things up, and besides we want as accurate as a representation of your character as possible. Look, I know you are a very busy person, so nothing really special, just give us an idea of the primary characters levels at a specific point in time(such as at the beginning or at the end of the story) any armour weapons and adventuring gear that they carry. For example: Bien Canonizado(Neutral-good male human wizard level 12) will be sufficient, it doesn't have to be too specific, in fact a broad base would actually be helpful. Just one very important note though: please give us notes on how to scale the adventure according to your characters levels, I mean if you decide to make your characters mid-level then give us tips on how to best integrate them into our low-level campaign. Please answer our questions via author's notes or chapter after-words so that all of us can read your response. Or, you could create a special appendix that will be included in the next chapter/ update. This is for the benefit of all concerned, so we didn't request for a private-message. Please? Please? Thank you very much. God bless!
Zanthoz 2005-02-02 ch 18,	abusesweet story u d4 m4m
Icy Mike Molson 2004-07-25 ch 6,	abuseTook me a little while to get into this, but finally, after six or seven months of almost no writing, I have rediscovered the spark tro read and review... But it's also 2:30 in the morning and I have no real intention of doing a detailed, in depth review at the moment. For now, Poiniard's tale is turning out to be a good read, pretty smooth, interesting, developed characters, yadda yadda. So ghood job so far, and maybe tomorrow I'll read a little more. And not be too interested in getting to bed to give you a real, Evil Editor review... Nah. You know how to write. Pretty good so far.
Tom Valor 2004-07-25 ch 15,	abuseI should have noticed much earlier that you've updated so much... Well I suppose that's what happens when you focus on another section on this site. The story's going great! The plot is geting thicker and the fight scenes are violently nice. Update soon!
Craeft 2004-07-03 ch 15,	abuseHeya Poin. Sorry it took me a while to catch up. hehe.. Been busy. Anyway, on to the review. Again, very nice work. Well laid out story. You have a way of writing dialogue and painting the picture of the scene. The last chapter, however, was a bit fast. I think (and this is just a personal style, so take it how you will, I think that if you could put more detail into the battles, confrontations, and tense situations, it would add a lot to the story. You put a lot of detail into the description of the area, which is good. I like to be able to see where I (with them) am at. Other than the speed and monochromatism (is that a word? Can we count it as one?) of the tense points, incredible. Keep it comin. I'm hooked.
mepb 2004-06-20 ch 8,	abuseI've read a lot of stories with plots revolving around magical weapons...but this is definitely the best and most original. The consistent action is good...and i love Poinard...the thief with a good heart. The bats are cool too. Loved the bats. Keep the bats.
fadedXblack 2004-06-13 ch 1,	abuseJust read the first chapter, very good. I like it very much. I like your descriptions and how fast and moving you put in the suspense. Bump. - Sandra
AndreIII 2004-06-08 ch 11, anon.	abuseThis story very well written and I would much like to see the rest, so please update.
Wandering Dungeon Master 2004-06-03 ch 11,	abuseHow long have I been up reading this? 1-2-3-4-5-6-7-8...8 Well, I must say that this is quite impressive. So... Where is my chapter 12? Excellent! Wow! Keep it up with Poiniard!
Craeft 2004-02-14 ch 7,	abuseVery well writen. Nice flow of words and word use. I only recently started reading and submitting to fanfic, but I must say that this story is one of my favourites. I can't wait to read on.
Tom Valor 2003-12-23 ch 7,	abuseVery interesting. I've been waiting for a continuation for quite a while now. Mheren and Brandt's story is quite intriguing. What kind of trolls was Poiniard talking about anyway? It must be a different sort of troll since he talks of shapeshifting. Hope you update soon!
EireCat 2003-12-19 ch 7,	abuseAnother fantastic chapter. :D Way to go. I am still loving this story! Your characters and descriptions are beautifully done. Keep it up!!
EireCat 2003-11-21 ch 6,	abuseWell, it's about time. lol Thank you! Once again, wonderful wonderful job. I love the way you create your characters and make them each so believable and unique. Keep up the great work!
EireCat 2003-11-19 ch 3,	abuseWHEN? When will we hear more of Poiniard and his sword of doom? I love this story. The main character is a lot of fun and _very_ well brought to life. Please don't make us wait forever to learn more of his exploits!
Icy Mike Molson 2003-09-28 ch 5,	abuseI'm not the only person to have seen(and admitted to seeing) Ladyhawk... It's a good essay, really, and hopefully one that will shbow people that not all thieves have to constantly be picking people's pockets(because that does irritate a DM after a while...). My only gripe is that you left out my pertsonal favorite thief, thbe confidence artist. I had a thief that made all his money just by reading tarot cards. Although I guess that does, to an extent, fall into the swashbuckler archetype... Damn it. Jacksonville lost. The days of Mark Brunell are over...

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