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Sanna Lan
2008-01-05 . chapter 4
So it wasn't Kuno? Damn it. Kodachi, maybe?
At this moment, my principal suspects are:
Konatsu, and the victim would be Ukyo
Dr. Tofu
Miss Hinako
Sasuke
I'd say Mousse, but Mousse doesn't use pockets ^.^
Sanna Lan
2008-01-05 . chapter 3
I'd say the murderer is a student from Furinkan 'cause not many people know Gosunkugi. That'd leave Kuno, Ukyo, Miss Hinako, Hiroshi, Daisuke, Yuka, Sayuri... Kodachi, maybe?
Sanna Lan
2008-01-05 . chapter 2
Damn it, there go my three principal suspects. It can't be Kasumi 'cause the murderer talked with her. It can't be Ryouga (even if it sounds like Ryouga) 'cause the murderer still has hands after the rain. And it can't be Ranma 'cause he'd never call Kasumi «Tendo-san» without it sounding suspicious.

Kuno, maybe?
Shadow Knight2
2004-12-06 . chapter 7
Thanks Raisins! I totally forgot about that. I thought I had deleted them all. Thanks again. And sorry it spoiled the surpise for you. But I fixed it now thanks to your advice!

Thanks again!
Raisins
2004-12-05 . chapter 7
Umm... you left one of your outline notes in the story. Right at the start of the last scene. It kind of ruins the surprise too, so you should get rid of it quick.
Innortal
2004-11-25 . chapter 6
I still say it is Ranko. The killer says they wish to reveal they did it all for a certain person.

I am working on the belief that after seeing how her male side was always treated, and after her friend Akane malleted her out of the room because she was scared, seeing them all attack Ranma for no reason and being unable to stop it may have finally driven her over the edge.

To be honest, I was planning on doing a story like that, where Ranko struggled to become seperate from Ranma to take him away from all the pain.

If I am wrong, let me know. I believe I am right judging by how she acted when that one woman touched her, who I am guessing was Nodoka, as she is a person Ranma would fear and would be an obstacle to her and Ranma's happiness.

Good luck on the next update.

Innortal

PS, you may want to tell us if anyone of us is close to saying who the killer is.
Innortal
2004-11-25 . chapter 5
Ok, I guess this means Kodachi and Happosai are now dead. I am still leaning towards it being Ranko.

Innortal
Innortal
2004-11-25 . chapter 4
Ok, from this chapter, I know it's not Kuno. The bokken was a dead give away.

We know the killer wasn't Ryoga, Mousse, or Shampoo because when it rained, they still were human.

The hidden truth of the dead soul means it was someone everyone thought of as innocent, so it is either Nabiki or more likely, Akane.

I doubt it was one of the fiancee brigade, as even Ukyo would be more worried about Ranma than how she enjoyed the killing.

So I am going to go with my first guess when I read chapter 3. I am going to take a guess that it is Ranko. The uncontrolled spasms might be Ranma trying to reassert himself. I will read on and see if I am right.

Innortal
The Liz
2004-11-25 . chapter 6
Beautifully written although I'm still not sure who it is. That's okay though, just makes me want to read more^_^ Update this story soon!
Taechunsa
2004-10-27 . chapter 6
I love this story. It is a definite grabber. Please update soon.

I am not sure how you arrived at the “10
GreyAB
2004-08-30 . chapter 5
Interesting style you have got going here, it just grabs you and wont let go. Hope to see some more soon.

As for my guesses, the victim for some reason I think is Akane (dont ask why its just one of those ideas that you get and wont let go). As for the killer, havnt a clue (think it might be one of the fiancee's though). Poor Kodachi though
Livvy22
2004-07-29 . chapter 5
Awsume story!! Wow i think i finally figured out that the murderer is Kodachi ... whom did she kill though?

Keep going ... and please dont stop your already started stories. Maybe put them on hiatus, but please dont stop them forever!
star
2004-05-26 . chapter 5
Well, Ranma's definitely not the killer. He wouldn't have been shopping, and he wouldn't have called Kasumi "Tendo-san". But doesn't Tofu always go nuts around Kasumi? It could still be him, if he went nuts and attacked someone by accident the first time. It might be Ryoga, since you're mentioned headgear in your hint, except for the problem of him getting lost. The victim...I don't think it can be Ranma, since he would most likely have been strong enough to survive, though he would have had trouble if Ryoga was doing to strangling. Nobody is really strong enough to kill Ranma without using extreme trickery and no martial arts (bombs, etc.). Ryoga also wouldn't be waking up on a bed, because he technically doesn't have one. He wonders around too much. Also, Kodachi wouldn't have called Ranma a 'common peasant', and his girl form is ruled out since Kodachi calls her "red-haired harridan". Also, Ranma wears Chinese slippers. Those are noiseless. It can't be Kodachi, Kuno, Kasumi, Soun (heard by killer), Happosai (killer surprised by bomb thrown), Cologne (doesn't walk on the ground), and Gosunkagi. Nodoka...couldn't be her. She calls Kasumi by her name, and wouldn't be mistaken as a panty thief. Kasumi also calls her 'Auntie'. Pantyhose Tarou wouldn't have a bed in Nerima, since he doesn't live there, so that rules him out. That narrows it down to Genma, Ukyo, Shampoo, Konatsu, Hinako, and Principal Kuno. Kodachi getting in the way...I think the killer is most likely Genma, and the victim is likely to be Nodoka. Maybe. My detective skills aren't the best.
TinyClownBean1
2004-05-10 . chapter 1
KUNO?? ANYWHO PRETTY GOOD YO DA BOMB L8ER
RavenKitten
2004-04-25 . chapter 5
I thought it was Soun for a monment.lol! But it can't be Ranma.. no.. The probably only strong one you haven't mentioned yet that could fight Kodachi...but you didn't mention Nibiki or Akane yet either.. But no.. Not Akane and Ranma.. Never! And i'm kinda begging to think the person she/he killed was a boy scince they kept calling them a basterd.. but since kuno was crying over them and calling them a 'pure sole' it seems like a girl... HMM!! lol! ^^' But you said to Terra-something[- -'] That Kasumi DID have something to do with this.. GR You so confusing! ^^'
Well Ja!! Keep going! This is great! So mysteriouse!! I wish I could write something like this!! -^o^- Update soon!
~*mews!*~
~RavenKitten ** !! ^-^ - - _ _* n.n n_n
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