i love this story it is one of my favorites. and i read in your profile which i might say is very long, that you are going to make a sequel. well i personally can not wait.

WOHO! YAY! BRAVO! That is a rockn roll story! The song totally fit da moment.

That rocked! Stupendous! Brilliant! Outstanding! Two thum-buhs up! OMG, it was just like a professional author's book!

Lmao!
That was good, but usually you slow it down more,
like,
Toulouse Died!
That's huge!
they would have done more.
And what with that big sentance that just keeps going? Good though, keep it up!

the end? i thought there will be more with the duke, but..well, congrats! it's a great fanfic! and i enjoy reading it! cheers!

how beautiful..*sheds a tear*

he do anything for them... makes me sad

ur gonna make him get shot again aren't you?

Ok, that so ruined the mood but whatever, once again everywell written ...

KEEP IT UP!

LOL

Yay! Megan that was great! Please write a sequel!

Hey great chapter! I couldn't read it earlier because I was on vaccation but I did know and it's great! Go Megan!

grr.. i hate 'The Duke' on your story more than 'The Duke' on the original one..

That title was weird...Oh well, another wonderfully written chapter!

Congrats! Write more soon!

hi! i know you have updated it to 9 chapters but i only read it until chapter 5. but this's getting more and more interesting, i promise i'll read the next chapters.

btw, your author note always makes me laugh. and.. what actually happen to lil kim?

bye!

Yay update soon..

BOB! how funny is this? i cant get enough of it, my fan fiction should be out soon , i posted it 1 week before today (14th). It's called Back to the Moulin Rouge. You should check it out (im not trying to advirtise it) but i want Charity to know about!

I LOVE YOUR HUMOUR! keep it up!

That was the funniest fic iv'e ever read!

BOB! LOL! I was laughing so loud when i heard that! kepp it up!

Thank you for writing it longer! i wonder how this is going to turn out, its so eventfull! keep writing!