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Onba
2009-08-02 . chapter 12
Good story, good story.
HawkAngel XD
2009-05-14 . chapter 12
wow, really good plot... amazing

HawkAngel
JoPoGirlsKickAss
2008-08-14 . chapter 12
that was amazing
i LOVED it
ur a great writer
100/100 :)
Stollhofen125
2007-10-13 . chapter 12
This story has been on my favourites for over a year now, and I've finally decided to write a review after my kajillioneth time reading it.

Wow. This is, hands down, one of the best Batman/Wonder Woman stories on the fanficiton website. It's seductive without being overly graphic, loving without be cutesy, passionate without being overwhelming, and makes me heart ache everytime I read it.

Thank-you for posting such a beautifully composed story on the webiste!
steelelf
2007-07-10 . chapter 12
Aw... I loved this story. It was so good.

poor Batman! He needs Di!
Akylae
2007-07-08 . chapter 1
Great job. I love everything about this story:

Bruce disbelieving the curse even with Diana witnessing it is in character. The idea of Bruce being saved by the innocents he couldn't is very poignant. He being haunted anyway is so sad and so true. You did a great job with his flirting/pretense/outwitting her. The no win curse and its almost almost-no-win solution is a great plot: both of them willing to die for the other and not willing to allow the other to die for them... Two words - true love.

Ugly girl writes pretty stories.
iLickWindows
2007-05-19 . chapter 12
Real good job.
Hepburn
2007-05-16 . chapter 12
I loved it and I have re-read it about 4 times! You are very talented!
Brittny
2007-04-21 . chapter 11
GR! Batman you $&#*&$%&*@$#&!

*SIGH*

This is so good. *sobs*
Brittny
2007-04-21 . chapter 10
OMG! Run Bruce Run! Run!

*sobs*
Brittny
2007-04-21 . chapter 9
*groans* Oh that was so good...

*reads three more times*

*moans, groans, cries*

Diana needs to change her plan.

*sobs*

Great job. *sobs*

*goes back to read three more times*
Brittny
2007-04-21 . chapter 8
LOL! Diana is munching happily on a french fry! LOL!

Clark is blushing about Lois. AW!

Boy can Diana eat. I love the friendship that you've written between the various Justice League members. Clark and Diana have a brother sister, very close, trusting relationship. LOL!

Boy can Diana eat!

I loved Diana's conference with Robin and Roxanna. She's going to die for Batman. *sniff, sniff* It's breaking my heart. Bitterweet romance.

"I work here Batman."

"On the roof of Uzana Costache's building?" LOL! The exchange on the roof was wonderful. Batman is a hard person to fool, but he really does have a soft spot where Diana is concerned.

I got a little teary when Diana did. I have a bad feeling about this plan.

Great job!
Brittny
2007-04-20 . chapter 7
Hello! A friend intoduced me to your story and I've been telling her my reviews so this time I thought I might actually let you in on my opinion, seeing as you're the author and all.

This is a fantastic story. I'm loving the budding romance between Batman and Wonder Woman and also just hanging out with the characters casually and getting to know them better. You also put the characters in really everyday situations to comic effect. WW getting ready for the ball with Hawkgirl was hilarious. So was WW asking Superman if her butt looked big...

I also love the story you've created. The haunting curse. It's so perfect for batman's character. A way to make something that I think is true about Batman on a psychological level, literal. It's a cool way to explore that haunted, vulnerable aspect of Batman's character. Great job. But on to Chapters 13 & 14.

13 - LOL! I love your disclaimer! All your disclaimers are really funny. I really got scared when all the ghosts started to attack Batman. Yay Jason to the rescue! Go Jason Go!

Alfred: "Propriety has its place no matter the state of being." LOL!

J'onn's eating Oreos! LOL!

Diana and Shayera watch Buffy?! LOL! Shayera and GL. LOL!

Thomas and Martha Wayne are so clever. Romeo and Juliet. I didn't see this coming. I'm so excited.

14 - M... Batman drops his pants. M...

No that wasn't the only good thing about this chapter. LOL!

I was so happy to see Batman fully concious and sounding like his old self. I loved WW bringing Batman up to speed on her investigations and Batman's reactions.

Batman and WW need to get it on before the end of this story.
reddragonn343
2007-01-29 . chapter 12
very nice conclusion...very good story
princessladybuggie
2007-01-27 . chapter 12
This was such a good story. I especially love your dialogue. Thank you!
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