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dream
2005-08-03 . chapter 1
this is the shortest, yet most powerful fanfics I've ever read--good work!!
Reiyuka
2005-02-08 . chapter 1
That title honestly was very appropriate...damn girl, you sure know how to write them. Still, it's a relatively good happy ending, so I can live with it.
rika
2004-10-17 . chapter 1
I liked this. A little confusing, but undoubtedly well written.
Andreiush
2004-09-13 . chapter 1
Beautifully written, i really loved it, although a Prequel would be a good idea.
RavenKitten
2004-07-28 . chapter 1
Aww!! XD Kawaii!!
Lady Mokodane
2003-07-05 . chapter 1
Very, very good. Almost addicting. Please, write more.
alanna
2003-07-05 . chapter 1
I like it the way it is, no need for new chapters.It's obvious what went on before. Shampoo drugged Ranma and dragged him to China. Ranma had to fight the whole Amazon village to return to Tendo dojo -right?
A real nice touch on the reunion!(I love with when Ranma is hurt and needs Akane badly. ^_^)
Kalio Halos
2003-07-02 . chapter 1
i'm glad you wrote another ranma story. as always, your writing is a beautiful artwork. personally, i would have liked you to have gone further with it because it almost feels rushed, but that's just my take. keep writing... but not for me or others.
Christine
2003-06-30 . chapter 1
Very touching story.I read your story 'Danger of Denial' awhile ago and i was curious,will you finish it?It's a good story i hope you continue.
prettyinpink
2003-06-30 . chapter 1
U need to make a prequel or something. I liked the story very much. Why not make it a continuation as well.
Jace3
2003-06-26 . chapter 1
That... was angsty. And I really dont know what happened... but I do know that war changes people.
I would like to see more of this story as to how it got this way and the healing process afterwards.

-(Jacie)-
Pogo
2003-06-23 . chapter 1
Well, this is certainly interesting. I don't have the slightest clue as to what led to any of this but it was good writing. Keep writing.
Selene
2003-06-21 . chapter 1
Lovely story about the aftermath of war and how it affects people... Poor Ranma! At least he is starting to heal. Great job! i would have liked to know more about the circumstances that forced him to leave (A war threatening Shampoo's clan maybe?) But you chose to focus instead on the aftermath where that wasn't really important. Good job! Keep writing...
~Selene
Leigh4
2003-06-21 . chapter 1
That's the end? But why did he leave, what happened? What will happen between the two of them? Akane was so cool! She is exactly what Ranma needs! I love her heart, she has the biggest one of them all in the series. So if possible, please continue, if not, thanks for sharing and it was really good.
Leslie
2003-06-20 . chapter 1
I think that was one of the most artfully written storys. It actually had elegence and was written with the intelligence to relise that few words create the most impact and that flash backs and huge discription (only great authors can give large decent discriptions) only cheepen the writting.
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